Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/8/16, 6:17 AM
Thanks for the new chapters! this is going so well! a little bit fast, but goes definitely well! Take your time to add descriptions of his body, his movement and behavior (for example, describe his flabby muscles, his chunky double chin, the change of his muscled pecs into big moobs, if now he waddles when he walks...) Would be interesting if some gossip magazines discovers Ben's new look, and he is massively humiliated due his new spoiled look!
Cris Kane
4/8/16, 3:09 AM
I agree with Viridian that spending more time with each guy and describing their mental changes in more detail would have been nice and even hotter. The physical changes were also pretty similar from one guy to the next. That said, I've already read it twice and really enjoyed it both times. Keep submitting!
Anonymous
4/8/16, 1:43 AM
This was amazing. Great work.
Anonymous
4/8/16, 1:06 AM
Very fun story! I like that Jason struggles as he's being overpowered - thanks for making that so gripping.
Mongo
4/8/16, 12:21 AM
I love this story, make me explode.
scudder
4/7/16, 11:52 PM
Very enjoyable, very open to more chapters... soon!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:56 PM
This is the second time I read this story. I got hard both times. Damn!!!!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:53 PM
Great story!! Spend a little time editing and checking out your grammar and usage. There were times that sentences didn't make any sense. Despite that, the story's premises was hot!!!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:45 PM
Loved this!!!! You're writing and the changes are awesome...very hot!!!
Anonymous
4/7/16, 10:34 PM
Hot concept, hot execution, tons of potential for follow-ups. Love the black and blue ink. :p