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Muscle69
4/9/16, 5:33 PM
Awesome....great work...thank you!!!
slatve499508824
4/9/16, 4:43 PM
Great story I liked the way Sven turned the guy into a mindless cum dump slave. Keep it going can't wait to read about the next city.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 3:02 PM
Jason's struggling while being rewritten was incredibly hot.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 2:55 PM
It would be interesting if the pen fell into the hands of a gay couple who discover its powers accidentally, but then decide to use the pen to spice up their waning sex life, changing each other and letting their fantasies come to life. I could see the changes becoming a kind of feedback loop making the changes get more and more kinky as they went along. Eventually they would completely transform themselves and have to be picked up by the pen's master.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 2:52 PM
Excellent work...great continuation!@
Anonymous
4/9/16, 7:17 AM
Got me goin good ;)
Apr 9, 2016
Anonymous
4/9/16, 7:06 AM
Yay! A great dilf story! How about a second part? I'm interested how this relationship develops. Louis can't sneak away from his wife and kids forever.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 5:22 AM
Can't get enough of your stories.
Anonymous
4/9/16, 1:51 AM
Lovely story! Sorry that I hadn't noticed it before
Anonymous
4/9/16, 12:24 AM
HOPE THE AUTHOR FINDS THE TIME TO COMPLETE THIS EXCITING STORY WITH CHAPTER 8....WE'VE BEEN WAITING [FAITHFULLY] FOR A FEW MONTHS FOR THE EXCITING CONCLUSION....PLEASE ORRIN, GIVE US THE ENDING.......