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Anonymous
3/23/16, 7:35 PM
Ah Ha! cop"s" ... the most marvelous thing I have been informed of now! Great!
BearBoi
3/23/16, 5:45 PM
People on this site can be hilariously catty and demanding sometimes I just hope Orrin's doing well enough to be writing happily even if it takes a while. But I do agree with the comments here asking for more mental struggle in the next chapter. (Looking forward to the gay redneck one too-- for some reason forced accent change is particularly super hot to me.)
Anonymous
3/23/16, 8:38 AM
HOT!!!
Anonymous
3/23/16, 8:30 AM
Grammar ruined this for me....was terrible :/
tjtj
3/23/16, 4:11 AM
Hot story, but a couple of misspelling is kinda distracting. Like the last part, his phone went ON not off.
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/23/16, 3:41 AM
Very nice! I would've wanted the transition to be more drawn out, but the sensuousness you've created is very nice!
Anonymous
3/23/16, 1:21 AM
Amazing end to this story! Can't wait to see more, Baralai!
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/23/16, 1:00 AM
Fantastic! I want to see what happens to him in terms of his new look. How will he change his appearance to please. AND what happened to the brother? How did such a young guy come to own such s big house? Looking forward to more stories if the series.
scudder
3/23/16, 12:35 AM
Hot, Hot. Hot, Always love a new Baralai story! Makes me wonder if Splooge is a hypnotic virus hidden in your paragraphs! Ruinu Inc, needs to expand to college campuses, fire stations, sports teams, politics. What's the hidden agenda of Ruinu? World domination?
Mar 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/22/16, 9:46 PM
a beautiful story.....well done