Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:49 AM
really intrested in how this is developing. please continue!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 10:36 AM
damn, that's so hot! please keep it up!
Nov 22, 2012
Anonymous
3/15/16, 5:25 AM
Amazing. Thank you.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 3:27 AM
This is one of your best stories. Great Job and please continue!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 3:26 AM
This is one of my your best stories. Great Job!
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:56 AM
The whole process of mind control is nice and hot as the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this story ends. What did Xavier become in the end and the relationship with the protagonist.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:53 AM
Really hot, yummy.
Anonymous
3/15/16, 12:28 AM
Agreed. The transition to the party was a bit abrupt. Would love to have seen a little more of Robbie's thought process after the j/o scene. I imagine him being in denial about how completely he now lusts after his former friend still but having accepted his inferior new role he'd be cringingly obsequious and idolizing to Adam, maybe volunteering to do his laundry and sniffing his used jocks, falling into the same kind of trance he was in when he put the panties on. Then he might come back to awareness as he finds himself giggling watching that Real Housewives marathon with Randy. He'd flee of course, but Randy would know his twinkification was nearly complete. ;)
A RE-EDUCATED FAN !
3/14/16, 10:47 PM
Here's hoping Edlam is alright: Like so, so many other fans, I come back every day to see if chapter eight has appeared...What is it, two month's since Daddy arrived home ?....Let's at least hope that when the author has the time to continue this exciting story, HE GIVES US A NICE 'EXTRA LONG' CHAPTER, to make-up for the long between chapters time span...Lot's of mental [interior] thoughts & feelings on the part of John & his [now] three sons to explain their new sexual actions....& this doesn't even account for officer 'cockforbrains', whom Edlam has promised is returning....[& while this is a gay oriented story, I for one wouldn't mind getting into the mind's & new actions of Maria, Vicky as well as the officers treatment of his wife & kids...Here's hoping that Alex slipped in a little re-education in the officers relationship's.....
Bulk
3/14/16, 10:17 PM
I feel like Tim or some policeman should investigate Doug's disappearance...