Recent Comments

Dave
1/30/16, 6:29 AM
These stories get better and better. I was crying real tears when Andy was "killed". That really speaks to the power of your story telling ability. Super glad it was just an illusion! Keep up the good work. Thanks.
Anonymous
1/30/16, 5:55 AM
Thanks,
Anonymous
1/30/16, 5:04 AM
It's fine. It's a small mistake that didn't really impact the overall story. All in all it was pretty good :)
bleuboy
1/30/16, 3:43 AM
I tried my best, sorry if my consistency or misspells were distracting. I honestly tried to clean it up as much as possible!
Apr 23, 2014
Anonymous
1/30/16, 2:01 AM
Thanks, This is one of my favourites.
Anonymous
1/29/16, 8:09 PM
So glad to have bubble back. I saw the original bubble on here, now I don't. I wish it were back along with the pink pill.
Anonymous51
1/29/16, 5:17 PM
Will there ever be a continuation of this story?
Jan 26, 2016
molsonbi
1/29/16, 5:10 PM
Thanks for responding back to our comments I wrote here before as to Travis and what happens next Hate to see him flushed away as something better should be in store for a natural but no matter what outcome love this story line I must be a natural too
Anonymous
1/29/16, 11:29 AM
Be careful with consistency. Eric Lauder was 40yo at first and then age changed to 32 a few lines later.