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Anonymous
12/20/15, 3:00 PM
Would love to see Jake turn the tables on Alex. And take control of Alex
Anonymous
12/20/15, 2:57 PM
Oh and you planning on writing the finale of "I love him but..."? Or was the last chapter the finale?
Anonymous
12/20/15, 2:41 PM
Plz reverse the hypnosis on jake and jj. Torture Alex instead
alexkeepgoing
12/20/15, 1:45 PM
First story what i saw in this site(ncmc) is your "i love him but..."! Now i crush on this site. And this winter, im very happy to read your stories again! My english is poor so i can't comment to you well. But i love that character(alex) and keep this scean during some chapters
Anonymous
12/20/15, 1:43 PM
First story what i saw in this site(ncmc) is your "i love him but..."! Now i crush on this site. And this winter, im very happy to read your stories again! My english is poor so i can't comment to you well. But i love that character(alex) and keep this scean during some chapters
EdIam
12/20/15, 8:57 AM
No worries. The 'slave and master' story is kind of tired. For me, the sexy part of total control is the rationalization you have to give the mind in order for them to behave so radically different from their normal behavior. I find it hot that Alex doesn't necessarily fill in the weird gaps his commands create and then describing how the characters minds fill in those gaps as best I can. While, currently, Alex is definitely in control of JJ, JJ's mind has made sure it understands WHY Alex is in control and created reasons for JJ to follow him that Alex didn't necessarily give him. There won't be any 'Yes, Master' in my story. That's FAR too bland...unless it somehow gives me a boner for one reason or another...but probably not.
EdIam
12/20/15, 8:54 AM
Without further ado, here you are, gentlemen! I'll begin the Chapter 6 construction soon. Enjoy!
Anonymous
12/20/15, 4:39 AM
I love the story but please don't make it into a "slave and master" one
Anonymous
12/20/15, 3:01 AM
I'm sad this is the last chapter.. I really would love to hear more of this.
EdIam
12/20/15, 2:12 AM
Ok, your patience will pay off soon, my friends! The Chapter has been sent to the proof readers. Should be posted tonight or tomorrow, depending upon how quickly I hear back from them! So now you can't blame me if it takes more time, lol, IT'S NOT ON ME ANYMORE!!!