Recent Comments

Cliff
9/17/15, 12:48 AM
It's good, even have some romantic vibe, guess it's too lovely for somebody here or NCMC. Just my humble opinion, I feel like it's a story for self acception, but a little too rush about that topic. We see Cliif's past, nowdays, and then......BOOM, he had been drugged, seen from other's eyes, then he can fell of his past. Well, he made big leaps in a short time, in a somehow restrained way . I know it's possible, but for this kind of life-changing things, I'd like to see some big event to trigger them, the protagonist do or feel something extreme, so I can easily have empathy with him.
Anonymous
9/16/15, 9:01 PM
awesome
Anonymous
9/16/15, 7:35 PM
Please, continue this series. I need to know where it's heading.
Anonymous
9/16/15, 5:56 PM
Second part please!!
Viridian
9/16/15, 4:12 PM
*Crickets* _That_ bad, hm? In a more serious vein: This was posted just hours before the NCMC closed and I was deprived of my feedback-fix. If you feel like saying something about the story, positive or negative, please don't hesitate to do so. I can also be reached at Gmail as zeabzinth.
webb025
9/16/15, 5:27 AM
I agree... but readers FORCED me to go on! :)
Anonymous
9/16/15, 4:24 AM
It's as good as any of your stories but I think the appeal of the first installment was the description of the brainwashing itself. The takeover of the boys minds.
Anonymous
9/15/15, 10:55 PM
He's not gonna move upstairs until the new worship rooms are ready!
Anonymous
9/15/15, 5:39 PM
"He drew a clear liquid from one of the vials into a syringe, and mixed it with fluid from another bottle." Horrible practise. (If you make a mistake with the second liquid, you've lost both doses.)