Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/29/24, 12:46 PM
Please, write another part
8/29/24, 11:13 AM
Great story. Would have loved to see a slow burn realisation of their lives changing post surgery that ultimately leads them towards each other in a power exchange.. hot. Keep writing :)
8/29/24, 11:06 AM
Amazing can’t wait for it to continue! Insanely hot!
8/29/24, 10:26 AM
Very promising premise, would have been fun to see more of it, but with slightly longer chapters, this felt a little rushed.
8/29/24, 9:44 AM
Really cool!
8/29/24, 8:47 AM
I am sorry, but I couldn't enjoy this chapter, the emotions were good and the fight scenes too, but it got to dark for me and Eleven's death soured me a lot, I felt like overkill

Pcm
8/29/24, 8:53 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) That's understandable, I know that this is likely not for anyone. Still hope that you will stick around to the end, and your input is always appreciated. Also, not sure if this helps things, but Eleven is not dead, just catatonic.

8/29/24, 8:57 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I see, I will stick to the end, as I will do my two stories and the what if, also, I hope that means she could recover eventually

Pcm
8/29/24, 9:33 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I know that I'm kinda fridging her (especially to drive the story of male characters), and that is kinda cruel. That would not preclude her from being included in other storylines, whether a prequel or sequel for this.

8/29/24, 9:39 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Okay
Anonymous
8/29/24, 8:31 AM
Although the violence in this chapter is much more apparent, the emotions are even more , with the highlight being col rescuing his brother and father

Pcm
8/29/24, 8:57 AM
@Anonymous It certainly is a dilemma for him.

Anonymous
8/29/24, 9:11 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I just love this series not just for erotic sex ( that also good) but also for the emotions and heart of the characters

Pcm
8/29/24, 9:30 AM
@Anonymous Thank you! I tried to keep make them lovable in some ways, corrupted or uncorrupted.
Anonymous
8/29/24, 8:47 AM
Sorry, I couldn’t read this to the end, not for me:(
8/29/24, 8:20 AM
Very excited to see where this is going, strong start!
8/29/24, 7:55 AM
Saw you recently posted a new story and posted the reason for your absence, btw Congrats! And glad to have you back. If you come across this comment (so late in the game) I was thinking a great "punishment" chapter would be seeing what havoc they can wreak on the entire frat that took advantage of Oliver. True, he was able to come to terms with himself due to that catalyst but I think a protective brother (and agent of Eros/Eris) might just want to help him get over the trauma by wrecking the entire frat down to the last tentative pledge...