Recent Comments

8/25/24, 2:27 AM
I think this story is shaping up to be a classic. The concept is a core slice of hypno fantasy, it hits at what always made mind control a kink for me, with straight college hunks being changed and their relationships with their friends and their own identity being warped but the level of character specificity and depth is awesome. The way you are able to add texture and differentiation between the characters, and really delve into their thought processes in their altered forms, makes it really compelling.
hairyartist
8/24/24, 1:03 PM
thank you, I love this and look forward to more!

8/25/24, 2:02 AM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Glad you like it! and thank you for dropping a message to say that! It means a lot! There's loads more chapters as I mentioned in the earlier comments! :)
Peter
8/25/24, 1:03 AM
wow great story where do you sign up at?
little marco
8/25/24, 12:17 AM
Chinese and other Asian doms, the rise of China, and China showing its power in the world are so hot! From the comments here, I can see I am not the only one who likes stories like this. Please write more!
smArtiePants
8/24/24, 8:18 PM
So much fun to read, hot as hell and with a dark underbelly. What could be better! It reminds me of some of the old original TWILIGHT ZONE stories. There could be a lightness, a sort of humor to it but eventually the knife would twist and make you gulp in fear. Course, none of them were as fckn HOT as this!
8/24/24, 7:09 PM
Great Chapter. What a cliffhanger. I wonder what are their connection to Ames?
Aug 23, 2024
Anonymous
8/24/24, 5:26 PM
Overall a hot story and I very much loved it! Though his comical proportions at the end kind of broke the illusion that he could possibly join the team like that. Still perfect beef fantasy!
8/24/24, 5:11 PM
Thanks for the recap! It's always nice to see one of those in stories with large cast, I agree.:green_heart: I also felt like the stories had less writing mistakes. And I did not expect to see a submissive top, but you are really good at coming with new ideas for the plot!!! :green_heart:
8/24/24, 4:11 PM
I love the creativity on display!!! But the grammar is a bit distracting. Things like "what do I due?" instead of "what do I do?", some missing commas, and I think you meant scream instead of keen in "high pitched keen he finally came"
8/21/24, 3:49 PM
Oooo this is exciting , can’t wait to see where this goes 🥵🥵🥵🥵

8/24/24, 2:59 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It was a real short one this time, just a quick catch up with the situation at hq, next chapter should be a bit longer :stuck_out_tongue: