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Jonanator
3/26/24, 3:54 AM
Very interesting. Can't wait for more.

3/26/24, 4:20 AM
@Jonanator Thanks! I’m having more fun writing this so here’s hoping I can keep it going until it’s end!
Anonymous
3/26/24, 2:33 AM
Loving it! Can't wait to see where this goes!
anonymous
3/26/24, 12:25 AM
Extremely hot story from a major rising talent in this genre. You really get in the characters' heads with subtlety, like when Dunc is in the machine, and the slow progression overall was masterfully done. The control collars need their own separate "aware" series, though.
3/25/24, 11:11 PM
Great chapter! I really hope to see more of Bob and Jack together.
buho guy
3/25/24, 10:11 PM
This story is STUPIDLY hot. I hope you'll continue it but even if you don't, thank you so much for writing this! One of the best I've read on the site in a while😄
3/25/24, 9:47 PM
Its great
3/25/24, 7:47 PM
Hot story - with a lot happening in a short length! You can always add detail and draw out any interaction between the antagonist and the other characters. That deepens the experience for the reader. In any case, you did your inspirations proud!
Mar 24, 2024
3/25/24, 7:42 PM
Dropping us right into a mystery! This will be fun. I couldn't quite picture the full situation the narrator and Ben are in (lying on the floor, wrists and ankles bound?) Seductive start! I can't wait to see what game the captor has in store, who this amusingly fiendish dude is, and what his plans are for our three rugby studs. 🏉💪
2/3/24, 3:05 AM
I really loved this story. It feels like a story I have always wanted. It feels like a story I might have written. I normally don’t give 5 stars to anything but this story got all high marks.

2/4/24, 12:39 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you man!! I appreciate hearing that especially since it’s my first story I was a bit nervous!

Anonymous
2/4/24, 12:51 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) It’s spectacular.

3/25/24, 3:36 AM
@[Rarg](/user/show/710551) now it's all revealed. I hope you keep writing.

3/25/24, 5:59 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Haha yup the mask is gone! But I do plan on it for sure when the inspiration hits :) it was rather fun!
Ab3
3/25/24, 5:47 PM
Woww that is hot... Jerked on it but it finished abruptly.. need more n more details so that we can release easily.. lolzz