Recent Comments

11/3/22, 9:58 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter.
11/3/22, 8:24 AM
The counting was just plain perfectly lewd! Hoverboard Becky was also iconic like Essex said. A perfect ending to a really good series, you outdid yourself Nori-tan!

11/3/22, 9:10 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) :grin:
11/2/22, 4:10 PM
so damn good. you thinking of doing another part?

11/2/22, 5:46 PM
@[hypnoalec](/user/show/10006660) There are 14 more parts!

11/2/22, 6:30 PM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) Awesome! Looking forward to it.

11/3/22, 8:19 AM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) Eager to see where this goes! Definitely curious to see how this evolves. Hopefully you plan to release these other pre-written parts sooner than later.
11/2/22, 8:23 PM
Will there be revenge?

felix
11/3/22, 6:59 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Possibly! We'll have to see...
11/3/22, 6:19 AM
I really hope you continue this series. You're the only writer making caveman transformation stories and I love it
Anonymous
11/3/22, 5:34 AM
A good start - looking forward to part 2
11/2/22, 1:35 PM
This was such a joy to read! And super hot, too, enough that it helped me to read it over multiple sessions. It definitely hit a whole ton of my buttons—demons with wild transformations, obscenely huge cocks, _tons_ of cum? As hot as the whole thing was I swear my favourite part was Jesús cumming in the shower. The sheer amount gets me going so bad, and this was an instant favourite click for that. I think you accomplished the slower burn really well. Intense homoeroticism can be accomplished as much with literal boning as with many other elements of sexual tension and you definitely captured some of those other ways to hotness! Also, I feel like you used italics to much better effect in this one. As usual, great writing, great descriptions, and I’m looking forward to more!

Sebastián Apollo
11/2/22, 8:16 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you so much, I always enjoy your comments. It was definitely a lot of fun to write; a lot of my stories are more "grounded", if that makes any sense, so it was fun to let loose. I am a fan of the slow burn as well as the hot boning, so I'm glad it wasn't too long as I tried to leave those traces of homoeroticism sprinkled throughout the work. And yes, thank you for your advice on the italics, I took it to heart on this one haha!

11/3/22, 4:57 AM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I think I get what you're saying about your stories being more grounded! I guess there's two ways to think about it: whether it could be happening in real life, in a certain sense, or whether it's logically consistent and followable in a way that doesn't demand very strong suspension of disbelief. I personally prefer the latter--I think a story can be really grounded in that sense as long as you knit everything together and don't make crazy jumps, even if there's fantastical shit going on. Besides, the desire to "ground" something that's fantastical tends to lead to a lot of cool ideas and conclusions you can make within the context of your stories. Asking myself the question "how do I make cool hot thing make sense?" usually makes it cooler and hotter. Anyway, looking forward to seeing more from you!
11/2/22, 1:31 PM
Hey ZAI....You JUST made my day--THANKS a MILLION for your positive comments (& suggestions)!! YES, I do plan to bring Batman into the storyline, as well as some of the Titans (as I'm primed UP 4 the Season 4 tomorrow)!!! I appreciate ALL of your thoughts/suggestions/insights & will do my BEST to incorporate some of them into the upcoming storyline-- in fact, as I read your comments, it's provided me an inspirational brainstorm to pivot from a forthcoming scene which could introduce the Caped Crusader, although my focus will still be DEFINITELY concentrating on the ongoing degradation, subjugation & humilation of the Supabitch-- but THANK YOU, Sir-- I'm humbled-- Have an AWESOME day!!:innocent:

Zai
11/3/22, 4:50 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You deserve positive praise and thanks for creating, writing & sharing this wonderful AU! Yay! Batman will eventually make an appearance and hopefully become part of Luthor's Lascivious Superhero Harem! Where nothing but muscled pretty boi studly men are always at the ready to service their Master's multitude of carnal needs! I'm excited to read who officially will be popping Superman's virgin Suppa-ass-pussy! Will it be Python, wearing a reptile print Speedo as he plows that Super-cunt? Jimmy, shoving his newly enlarged, angry red cock-rocket up his one-time pals twat? Or his true Master? His only real Master? Lex Luthor! The hottest bald hunk ever? With his humongous cock of death? Ramming and pulverizing the supremely tight, virgin Superman-honey-hole as he has the Kryptonian in a white jockstrap while he's wearing a scarlet, sheer Speedo?! Can you tell I've got a ripe and vivid clothing fetish/kink!?!? Ciao!
11/2/22, 10:25 AM
A solid ending to a wonderfully inventive story. The world needs more sluts :triumph:

11/3/22, 3:16 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) And I only do this for the world! More sluts for everyone. Thank you, Norismo!
Nov 2, 2022
11/3/22, 2:43 AM
Amazing story, would love a continuation.