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Blue moon under hell
6/5/22, 8:50 PM
Is the the last one supposed to be the "why didn't you mark this nsfw?" copy pasta?

Anonymous
8/8/22, 4:37 AM
@Blue moon under hell I'm glad someone else said it, I'd feel crazy if I were the only one who noticed. Honestly makes it all the funnier that it was legitimately one of the hottest stories here.
8/8/22, 3:22 AM
Nu, you are a master at the art of escalation and ramping up the stakes! Your sense of humour and your understanding of how a typical, flawed person might act in this situation are also excellent.
Harley
8/8/22, 2:52 AM
B) !
8/8/22, 12:18 AM
E. Have to go with the big payout.
8/8/22, 12:15 AM
Even though I am a bit sad about the ending, I knew it was coming since I've already read TTMaB. Even without knowing your stories are connected I found this one so interesting that it's now 3am, I've been reading for at least two hours, I have to wake up in five and it was completely worth it!. I'm really interested to hear what happened with Awki and Tuktu. Hopefully they got a better ending and somehow managed to change Tuktu's fate. But for now, I am going to sleep. As Mrs. Maisel says: Thank you and good night!
7/30/22, 9:55 AM
Sir, it has been so long. Have you made any progress?

8/7/22, 11:33 PM
@Superbelt Hello! Thank you very much for continuing to be interested in the story, I really appreciate it, Superbelt! Honestly, I was pretty devastated with the lost of all I had already written due the failure on my computer. It wasn't just a very advanced draft of chapter 13, but parts of 14 and notes of what would be seen in the future along with some commissioned stories and ideas for new stories and drawings, and trying to rewrite all of that again from scratch left me somewhat angry, frustrated and depressed. It was really a hard strike, especially because every time I tried to retell the story everything seemed to be wrong, with too many words repeating themselves in a row, poorly put together sentences and the feeling that I wasn't able to say what I wanted. I don't write with big literary pretensions, but I always strive to write something that the readers would enjoy, and the feeling that I was doing a horrible job was trully overwhelming. But I've been trying to came out of the frustration, and I'll do my best to have another one before the end of August. It probabbly will be another long chapter, and maybe I'll have to split it in two due the amount of characters that will be involved and mindfucked. Thanks again for the interest, pal! I'll be back soon.
Ohayo
5/7/22, 9:15 AM
This is great, but would you mind giving the characters some appearance description? Like how old and tall the two thugs and Kyle are. I usually use Google to find people who meets the characters' description but this is impossible when there is no description! It was hard for me to read the story without imagining their looks. Sorry if that bothers you.

8/7/22, 11:15 PM
@Ohayo Hi! It doesn't bother me at all, pal! you will find the descriptions of Kyle, T and Chuy at the beginning of the story, and I gave the description of Terry in chapter 11 (he will be important on the upcoming chapters). But maybe they weren't extensive or good enough to give you an idea of how they look, so I'll try to go back and add more, and I will give a reminder of their looks in the next chapter. Thanks for the advice, Ohayo!
8/7/22, 9:38 PM
I think I've reread, and enjoyed, this chapter like half a dozen times I'm the last week. It's super fun and sexy.
Anonymous
8/7/22, 7:29 PM
Incredible! And an interesting plot twist at the end. Great series!!
8/7/22, 7:05 PM
Thank you, it has taken a while to develop.