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3/19/21, 9:17 PM
this looks like a very promising series like this, would love to see more of Ethan and James
3/19/21, 8:51 PM
Hot. Someone send me a link, I want to post some selfies.
3/19/21, 8:48 PM
I generally loved this one, and I thought it had some very hot scenes of mental transformation. My one pet peeve was that the (apparently secular and progressive) "activist group" didn't seem to fit with some of the characterizations of Micah (giving a pro-abstinence speech) and Elijah (being very offended by profanity and sexual references). To me, the story would have made a LOT more sense if they were Christian or Mormon "do-gooders."
3/19/21, 8:34 PM
Hey folks - catching up on comments. Thank you so much for writing them! [@TransformHeaven](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/295209) - Believe it or not, I had three ideas for who the mysterious assgrabber was. I went with the one that felt the most earned. [@Buffy67](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/13727) - I don't think you're evil, just sexy ;) [@TaylorGuy](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10000710) - It's not likely anyone will be getting their smarts back. I understand it's a turnoff for some folks, but I've got to write my kinks the way I feel 'em. I've been trying hard to make sure not *everyone* in this story ends up as a brainless himbo. And yeah, it's safe to say there will be consequences. [@MrDick](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001656) - What if we did both? Twisted AND mushy? ;) [@Suited](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/78337) - That brings up an interesting question. Is Marc a natural gay man? Or did the ring make him gay? [@maggiemee88](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/911774) - Have you been reading my private notebook? [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - As you know, since the last chapter is up already, that's not quite what happens. It was *very* close to my original plan for the ending. The ex-boyfriend angle is something I wish I'd thought of! [@Proteus](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/961566) - Thanks! As Strunk & White says: omit needless words. I don't intend for this universe to be connected to any of my others. I don't like feeling like I have to remember rules from stories I wrote 10 years ago. [@DuskSkullKing](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1001913) - Oooh... now there's an interesting possibility.
Dec 16, 2019
3/19/21, 8:17 PM
very hot. Keep this going. a submissive slut Dad is a good thing.
3/19/21, 8:02 PM
I always look forward to a new chapter ❣️ excited to read the next one. good work
3/19/21, 7:52 PM
pure hot mean fun. this is great and the mental breakdown of Eli i really well dine.
3/19/21, 7:01 PM
@Trick: I made the comment before the edit warning the chapter was cut
3/19/21, 6:55 PM
The desire to wear clothes was taken, I think. Maybe? I’m already loving this. I especially like the first bit where it explains who is doing this but not why. It immediately makes me think someone used the technology already on the people in the underground bunker. “It was strange, and he wasn’t sure why he was doing it, but it was his job for the day and good workers did as they were told.” That’s an awesome little bit, if I’m right. The workers think they know what’s up and are protected from the effects of the changes, meanwhile they’ve already been changed to do whatever they’re told. Super hot setup!
3/19/21, 5:50 PM
one of the best stories and ideas I've read on this site in a long time!