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6/12/20, 3:26 AM
I need the next chapter asap!!! Can't wait to read it!
6/12/20, 3:25 AM
I appreciate how unpredictable and slippery this story is. I can’t wait to see how it surprises us next. No matter what, I’m sure it will be just as hot in future chapters as it was in this one.
6/12/20, 3:18 AM
This chapter is even hotter than the first! I love how you write dialogue. Looking forward to the next installment.
6/12/20, 3:07 AM
You're welcome! I've hoped someone would add to what I started, but it isn't always easy to place yourself in someone else's world. Sex scenes can be difficult, my advice is just to write the scene how you imagine it, you can add to it or edit it after, trust me it can take a few tries to get it to feel right and make sense, and that doesn't always work either. And basic rules for how the nanites in my setting work, which I think you already realized anyway, but, just saying something is true to someone won't work unless it's preceded by *Truth or Dare?* and that must be phrased as a question to that player. Though, until the next players turn a truth or dare can be added to for that player. Thats pretty much it, my intention with Truth or Dare was for the nanites to infect the world, therefor making reality alteration possible, but the populace oblivious to it. Anyway, awesome start, I really enjoyed this and really am looking forward to more! And good luck!
6/12/20, 2:50 AM
Thanks, guys! This is literally my first time writing fiction since I was in high school. And special thanks to you, NANOwriter, for creating the world this exists in. TBH, I'm kinda worried about introducing sex next scene. Making sure all the action is clear and makes sense. Wish me luck! (fingers crossed)
6/12/20, 2:41 AM
Not entirely my thing but it got me hard. Do i detect some social commentary?
6/12/20, 2:08 AM
Awesome! This is a great start, I can't wait to see where you take it.
Jun 11, 2020
6/12/20, 2:06 AM
@The Influencer OpenAI recently submitted a paper on the successor to GPT2, GPT3. It has 100 times as many parameters as GPT2, and as one might expect is also way more powerful than GPT2. They also created an API to allow other companies to interface with GPT3 (They're not releasing the model unfortunately so their API is the only way to get at it). Apparently for the first two months they're doing so without charging for it, so aidungeon could potentially switch from what they're currently using (GPT2) to GPT3. If so, a forum post here with results could be quite something. Even if they don't do that, it sounds like fun.
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6/12/20, 2:05 AM
Hot story! I love stories of motor cops being humilited and debased while they wear their uniforms or some alterated uniform. Do you plan to make a follow up? Would be great if we see more of this universe, but with other changes, or maybe even with some unexpected fail in the reprograming of a squad. For example, would be fun if a good looking squad end up all dirty and messy.