Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/25/20, 2:53 AM
I loved this and really want to see what happens next!
Anonymous
5/25/20, 12:54 AM
Hmmmm love a good moooocow story!!
bleuboy
5/25/20, 12:22 AM
This was a wonderful treat--kind of wondering if Kit will double back on his morals? I mean, guys like Chuck and Adam are ruining his way of life, even if indirectly. Who cares if their lives are ruined? 😈
5/25/20, 12:19 AM
Can hardly wait for the next few chapters: Love the 'new' reality being created....[bet someone's going to piss his pants tonight, like he did at 18 !!! I'm supprised he hasn't craved a smoke yet...Wonder what tatoos his family has planned for him & how long before he starts losinghis education & talking more like the skinhead lad he's becomming !!!
svplgsmslm
5/25/20, 12:09 AM
Who cares about coffee? Loved the way it progressed. Nice work.
5/24/20, 10:34 PM
I guess it depends on what you mean by "dead". To me, they both died when they completely embraced the power of the suits. Nick and Ben ceased to exist at that point because the programming wiped their brains clean. Unfortunately, that was the main flaw that had to be fixed since it also wiped out their humanity. (The programming gave the appearance of humanity, but it couldn't compensate for a lack of emotional response, hence the upgrade.) Since the programming had no use for them anymore, it caused their bodies to, essentially, self-destruct.
5/24/20, 9:27 PM
This series is hitting every note for me!
5/24/20, 9:13 PM
This probably isn't what you intended, but the imagery in the final paragraph gives me the impression that Nick and Ben are dead. Still, I'm interested in seeing where this story goes next!
5/24/20, 9:09 PM
what a hot fucking story!! love the twist with chuck's body actually being into it without him realizing it, and also loved the fact that this big mountain of a man is squirming when he's confessing to kit. please write more and have something happen with chuck, I wanna see him become more submissive!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:45 PM
Good story, looking forward to reading more.