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5/24/20, 10:34 PM
I guess it depends on what you mean by "dead". To me, they both died when they completely embraced the power of the suits. Nick and Ben ceased to exist at that point because the programming wiped their brains clean. Unfortunately, that was the main flaw that had to be fixed since it also wiped out their humanity. (The programming gave the appearance of humanity, but it couldn't compensate for a lack of emotional response, hence the upgrade.) Since the programming had no use for them anymore, it caused their bodies to, essentially, self-destruct.
5/24/20, 9:27 PM
This series is hitting every note for me!
5/24/20, 9:13 PM
This probably isn't what you intended, but the imagery in the final paragraph gives me the impression that Nick and Ben are dead. Still, I'm interested in seeing where this story goes next!
5/24/20, 9:09 PM
what a hot fucking story!! love the twist with chuck's body actually being into it without him realizing it, and also loved the fact that this big mountain of a man is squirming when he's confessing to kit. please write more and have something happen with chuck, I wanna see him become more submissive!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:45 PM
Good story, looking forward to reading more.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:40 PM
I loved how he starts his change with wanting to dance to German tech club music. That was funny! Good story!!
5/24/20, 7:04 PM
Leaves me wanting more.....
Anonymous
5/24/20, 6:13 PM
Maybe is because you were posting daily updates, but this waiting is driving me crazy! don't get me wrong, I respect your writing talents, take your time, but just wanted to say your loyal readers are still here!
5/24/20, 4:35 PM
excellent! cant wait for more!
5/24/20, 4:12 PM
“I’ll need to ditch the gas mask, so I’ll need you two to stay at least six feet behind me." HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (in all seriousness, great story. keep it up.)