Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:45 PM
Good story, looking forward to reading more.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:40 PM
I loved how he starts his change with wanting to dance to German tech club music. That was funny! Good story!!
5/24/20, 7:04 PM
Leaves me wanting more.....
Anonymous
5/24/20, 6:13 PM
Maybe is because you were posting daily updates, but this waiting is driving me crazy! don't get me wrong, I respect your writing talents, take your time, but just wanted to say your loyal readers are still here!
5/24/20, 4:35 PM
excellent! cant wait for more!
5/24/20, 4:12 PM
“I’ll need to ditch the gas mask, so I’ll need you two to stay at least six feet behind me." HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (in all seriousness, great story. keep it up.)
5/24/20, 3:29 PM
Ok, ya gotta keep going on this amazing story! And really soon!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:27 PM
I kind of agree with Rotherham... I didnt feel rushed as much as it needed to be longer, more of the seduction, as if the victim wondered what it was he needed or more detail on what the changes felt like. It's not a criticism: it's a compliment that you've created a story people want more of. So now get to work and write a chapter 2 with more detail
Anonymous
5/24/20, 2:47 PM
wonderful surprise...great work
5/24/20, 2:34 PM
I rather like this one. It seems like the changes are likely to persist when they get home though. I wonder ... since the society has clearly had to adjust to the Change, why did it happen? They must have been more like our travellers' original world, though maybe something like the Change happened at a later date or was not as universal. It would be interesting if they could help with the stability issues.