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Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:12 AM
I like! A lot, too!!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 2:23 AM
Hot!p
5/24/20, 2:08 AM
Oh my. Well it's to be expected from one of the most experienced authors on this site. I love how portray Hugh's confusion by asking all these questions, trying to understand what's happening. When that by itself is incredibly hot.....well, that's an author who's a master at his craft.
5/24/20, 1:21 AM
loved it! wish there was more! i guess that means time for a part 2
5/24/20, 12:38 AM
Nice premise but it feels a tad rushed (a problem i have with my works so don't worry). It might be better to see Seb see the guy's kinks, desires and fears to make his changes more ironic. I'd also like to see why Seb does all this, is there a backstory or is he made of evil? Carry on the good work!
5/24/20, 12:10 AM
Ha ha, EJG speaks very well! I scanned this story and will admit that it is not for me, if only because I know there are people in this world who actually think like the jock students in this tale and believe the garbage they spout. :( But people are free to write what they wish, so I commend you on a story well-written! :D
M
5/23/20, 11:50 PM
this was a fascinating read. it seems like English isnt your only language and I noticed some word mis-uses that made it difficult to read on the first try. giving your work to an editor is something that no one should be ashamed of, and it will encourage a stronger reader response. please dont give up writing, as i said before this was a hot read, i would have liked to see more of the programing that Bryan experienced. like what commands did Thomas program into the white noise?
5/23/20, 11:43 PM
It begins. Liked this better than the last chapter. Positive reinforcement is the way to go. Maybe Hector should think about training Ivan for protection too. Put those muscles to use...aside from the ways he's already planned of course.
5/23/20, 11:39 PM
Sorry, this is late. I was on edge the whole time. Glad he got control back. Can't say I approve of the corporal punishment though. They say positive reinforcement is best for training pets.
EJG
5/23/20, 11:33 PM
Damn. For a submissive older fa**** like me,into dominant jock bullies, this so got me off. Was hoping for the students to gangbang the teacher. If this had those boys growing muscles/cock growth (a slight hint at the class taking up gym),even better. Don't EVER be put off by anyone here getting moody 'coz u said the F word. Made it hotter for me.