Recent Comments

5/20/20, 7:17 PM
It seems just the beginning of Edmund's revenge. Can't wait to see how he use these drones.
5/20/20, 6:55 PM
There just aren't that many synonyms for 'ass'... Well, apart from words like 'fundament' which sound Shakesperean...
Anonymous
5/20/20, 6:41 PM
Clever! The unusual trophe of having the narrator transformed by the "bros" he's watching was a switch! Gives "the bros" more credit than usual! Bro On!
Anonymous
5/20/20, 6:40 PM
next chapter please!!
5/20/20, 6:33 PM
"love chute" :-) - you always have such a way with language!!
firesix
5/20/20, 4:52 PM
Whether it's a MBMBAM reference or not, it's fucking great. Very hot story, very entertaining. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
5/20/20, 3:32 PM
I'm glad you guys are enjoying it! I'm gonna introduce "Ben" eventually, but I'm trying to do it in a way that explains things while still being interesting (and ideally, sexy). So, uh, watch that space?
swngbthways
5/20/20, 3:18 PM
I LOVE this series. If it's not much to ask though, are we gonna know HOW Adam got the nanites in the first place? Just curious.
Anonymous
5/20/20, 3:03 PM
I had to go back to Chapter 3 to pick up the story line. Hot conclusion to the series!
Anonymous
5/20/20, 12:32 PM
Thanks, I'm loving this!