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May 4, 2020
Diz
5/5/20, 3:22 PM
Really enjoyed this! Not a foot fetishist myself but everything about the forced control, awareness and arousal control was great.
5/5/20, 1:23 PM
Hey boys! I've added 1275 words haha. I have used these words to introduce Travis's classmates (Though it may take a bit before the staff has reviewed the update of course). I hope you all enjoy it and that this addition helps make the class seem a bit more realistic!
Anonymous
5/5/20, 12:25 PM
I really enjoyed the story. loved the concept of the stem implant. Also, Curtis and Greg were well developed as was their dynamic. I know you are moving on and you have a neuro mate concept coming together but maybe the first chapter could revisit these guys? and then launch from there. Though I get why some might like a happy ending these are stories about enslavement and that concept seldomly goes hand in hand with happy endings, though it definitely can. I imagine greg buying a device that can measure electronic activity and discovering that Curtis is not at all decommissioned. the company discovering this. Greg struggling as Curtis puts him down. Waking in processing at the company with a vision of a naked Curtis, standing rigid and blank as a door slides open followed by a gurney holding the pesky attorney pushed by two uniformed expressionless workers and accompanied by Deidre. Then both Greg and Robert the attorney get pressed into neuro mate service. that's a slave's wishful thinking, lol.
May 5, 2020
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/5/20, 11:01 AM
WMM is Warp My Mind
5/5/20, 10:20 AM
Agreed, he lacks the charisma needed to make a selfish protagonist likable, I hope he improves
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 10:08 AM
@sanchezinc 27 sir uwu
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 9:56 AM
A short one but pretty good; it has a few mistakes here and there but nothing that diminishes the great idea behind it, I wish it was longer tho Hope this is not the last we see from u; also what is WMM??? õ_o
5/5/20, 9:26 AM
Oh my! You are all so nice! I am adding to the class by making the students present themselves to the rest. I am currently writing it / thinking about what the students will look like! Thanks again for all the sweet messages. *New Guy in Town* you're an angel for helping! Thank you *Benv* and *Jockboy Joe* !!! I am really happy people are enjoying my writing! And *Kane Lerr*, I think a lot of us would love this academy haha. <3
RN
5/5/20, 9:20 AM
I love this series but this ather a sad ending.
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 9:07 AM
@Elito-pup,quizas yo te pueda ayudar. Que edad tienes cachorro? Great story, short but effective