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RN
5/5/20, 9:20 AM
I love this series but this ather a sad ending.
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 9:07 AM
@Elito-pup,quizas yo te pueda ayudar. Que edad tienes cachorro? Great story, short but effective
5/5/20, 8:23 AM
@The Influencer I get that. From the moment I started reading this story I knew it won't be a happy ending.. I just never anticipated that it would leave me so heartbroken. The ethics prof who battles with the moral dilemma of having the opportunity to have the guy he longing for but can't help it to feel like he is betraying his autonomy as a human being when acting on it . I know you didn't put overly emphasis on the moral contradiction this is no ethics course after all but some part of me just hoped the love-mad professor and his drone-like pupil would have a… not happier but more fulfilling ending. But that's probably just the foolishly romantic side of me speaking. It was over all a exceptionally well written story and very pleasant to read. I was ably to sink into the story like I haven't been for quite some books I read. I hope you keep up the good work and won't be to mad at me for hoping/wishing for some kind of different ending.
5/5/20, 8:15 AM
One thing i hate about this story is how unlikable the protagonist is. I know the story is good for wank material only but evertime i read the protagonist's though process my dick deflates for how unlikably selfish he is. Ive read stories with the same premise with selfish unlikable characters but somehow colin manages to stand out for my wish for him to get hit by a truck. overall good wank material as long as it focuses on the anything other than the protagonist
May 5, 2020
5/5/20, 8:11 AM
eres mexicano? ame tu historia ojalá un día encontrara un chico así en mi casa jaja xD
5/5/20, 7:04 AM
I'm sorry I bummed you guys out. I didn't realize my readers were such hopeless romantics. :P I appreciated the comments (keep them coming please). I knew writing this story that it was going to be a mostly sad story. I think all the characters are complicated and not innocent, including Greg and Curtis. Everyone's motivation is questionable which leads to a lot of moral ambiguity. I think it would have felt cheap to write an ending where they end up together, given they should never have been together in the first place. I have a general idea for a series based in the same world, unrelated to the characters of Greg and Curtis (sorry, guys). It'll be a while before I write it, if at all. Admittedly, this last season of Westworld is too fresh in my mind and a lot of the concepts in my story are too similar for me to feel like I have an original idea. Maybe if I mull it over I'll feel better about it. I have other ideas in mind, and I think my next story will perhaps be a bit less melancholy than this one. Keep the feedback coming, it really helps. Even if I don't take it all in, having a sense of how my work is being received helps me to write more.
5/5/20, 5:52 AM
I would've hoped for a happier ending, but you are a great writer! Thanks for a interesting, well-written story.
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5/5/20, 5:30 AM
This is definitely one of the hottest stories I've read on Spiral! Bravo!
May 4, 2020
Anonymous
5/5/20, 3:09 AM
If you ever decide to write a sequel, I would be the first in line! Make Justin and his friends use each other's socks! Let them combine their foot sweat to each other! Also do sneaker fucking and sneaker sniffing! Those are sexy stuff
5/5/20, 3:00 AM
this is the end? but but.. it is so sad ._. will there ever be a sequel or a happy ending for them?