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Apr 8, 2014
4/25/20, 11:01 PM
Very good! I sense a lot of potential here. Keep up the good work!
4/25/20, 10:38 PM
This chapter felt a bit like a tease; I mean we do get to see Colin under right control and the beginning of his transformation, but it's just a slight glimpse. Right when we start to get somewhere, the chapter ends. It's the frustration of having to wait for the next chapter to learn more, which is a good thing in general. But please don't make us wait too long to see how Hawk changes Collin and how Collin changes.
Bimarguy
4/25/20, 8:51 PM
yes it is devilish , and short and sweet
4/25/20, 7:32 PM
nice. i wanna see the teacher make him into his own personal stud who lives to pleasure his ass, tongue and cock
Martin
4/25/20, 7:27 PM
Probably just a misunderstanding. There are many parts in this series, but this is the last one, Willie has published so far. I don't think there's any bug, you should see all the previous 8 chapters just fine!
M
4/25/20, 5:52 PM
The best thing about writing on the internet for no money is that you can write whatever. Sure, we as your readers can say, "well, this didn't work for me really." or "I'm not that into that..." and it should NEVER interfere with your writing choices. We read your content for free because YOU are generous. If you write something that sparks for YOU, then please continue to write the way YOU please. The diaper loving sect of the site will praise you, the diaper accepting for the sake of story device will dip our toes into a foreign body of water, and the unworthy will flee. I am personally sorry if a comment I left in the previous chapter contributed to dropping the diaper theme of the first work. PLEASE don't abandon that aspect of this story, it made a significant difference in the intensity and hotness of the subverting quality of the brainwashing, even if diapers are not, and will probably remain, not my thing. DON'T STOP ON OUR ACCOUNT! Never! When you let your freak flag fly highest, I get the most intense brainwashing scenes from your writing. So DO it. Scare the normals, trouble the narrow minded, and push the bounds of taste, because your following is just as into it as you are, and they will revel in it.
jemsea13
4/25/20, 5:19 PM
Love this! I sure hope there is more to come!
4/25/20, 5:13 PM
maybe a bug in the website?
4/25/20, 4:58 PM
love it, very nice
swngbthways
4/25/20, 4:50 PM
I ALWAYS love your imagination and where you take your audience via your characters. I'm looking forward to the NEXT chapter. I wanted to see via a picture, how the three guys look before they were transported to the valley. 😁