Recent Comments

5/4/20, 7:29 PM
Incredible story! Love the strange magic in the air--and, of course, the stupefication and muscle growth. Wooo!
5/4/20, 7:27 PM
Amazing! So happy this came back!
David
5/4/20, 6:58 PM
loved it. More twinning in the future would be very hot.
5/4/20, 6:49 PM
This is a great story so far! Love the brainwashing of the two athletes to act out a typical Batman and Robin scenario. Hope there's lots more to come!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/4/20, 6:15 PM
This puppy would have been down on all fours sniffing his crotch!
5/4/20, 5:47 PM
excellent start! can't wait to see what happens.
Anonymous
5/4/20, 5:43 PM
I'm hard!!!
5/4/20, 5:33 PM
Wow! I don't recall many stories where the retribution feels so good to read. It's nice to know that some stories on here fulfill that sense. Thank you!
5/4/20, 5:22 PM
id love more details of sex, and describing how the bodies look and such.
5/4/20, 5:14 PM
Definitely like what you did with this chapter and the change in commands makes the story more engrossing. The problem with this chapter is it's a bit short for the amount of time that the class takes place. The class is a seminar style one, 3 hours long, but reading through this makes it seem like it's only a half-hour long. It's the first day so they might not use the full three hours, but it did seem to be rushed. The professor could have played with the students a bit more, taken his time making them aware of the triggers and the effects. Time didn't need to drag on, but definitely the pace needed to be slowed down more than it was.