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AirStriker1
9/15/19, 8:33 PM
Thank you everybody for the kind words and constructive feedback. This is the first story ive written in over 15 years, so really wasnt sure how it would go down, I'm glad people enjoyed it. I have part 2 all planned out, just need to get time to write it :)
dsull96@aol.com
9/15/19, 8:23 PM
great story i absolutely loved it. please write more just great
9/15/19, 7:59 PM
I hope you write more to this.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/15/19, 7:44 PM
I agree with Bibimbap
Anonymous
9/15/19, 6:02 PM
Excellent story so far, very fresh and hot idea.
Bibimbap
9/15/19, 5:04 PM
Great addition to the story! I hope you add another chapter. The "Homo Union" sounds promising, maybe you could give us a tour for it, exploring some of the collateral changes that this edition made on the universe!
Bulk
9/15/19, 2:43 PM
I really don't know how the Iran take over MacGuffin can interfere with anything. It's almost never mentioned other than in the introduction. It's a very good excuse to have the CIA send over people to investigate and to have a secret mind-control / transformation plot going on at a big scale. Well done.
Papa Werebear
9/15/19, 11:27 AM
Wow. I'm unfamiliar with her works. And I cannot take all the credit, this work is built on FiddlerBear's stories. But thanks for the kind words! 🐻 😉
Anonymous
9/15/19, 9:59 AM
really hot story!! Please make a rubber sequel.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
9/15/19, 8:32 AM
I hope this continues, also I will give you a suggestion: a young (late teens or early 20s) aspiring hero with healing power get turned int the adoptive son of the Editor and Lightningstrikes, he keeps his healing powers, but can also manipulate the hormones of the others, besides healing, a Support for the Damage-dealing Lighting and to the Thinker Editor, also a hero with the ability to turn his skin into stone, after been turned into the Family's butler, with the villain codename “Rock Hard”