Recent Comments

Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/17/18, 12:22 AM
I would definitely take the first three rounds. The last one would scare (as much for the pain as the loss of “myself”). Awesome fantasy
2/17/18, 12:21 AM
@anon, yep, a few finished chapters are on mcstories. I've got a few more chapters to edit after that. I should have it all finished over the next two weeks, if all goes according to plan. I'm glad you guys like the story so far.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/16/18, 11:37 PM
More! Need more.
UchihaDEMS
2/16/18, 10:59 PM
Muy corta lamentablemente, pero aqui te puedo decir un par de detalles que tengas en cuenta, si vas a querer poner lo que ambos personajes estan pensando, te recomiendo escribir en 3ra persona omnisciente, Dejar una línea entre párrafos es muy importante para no cansar la vista, también para diferenciar entre los que hablan.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/16/18, 10:58 PM
Great start. Hoping for more.
Anonymous
2/16/18, 6:06 PM
Thanks I enjoyed it very much <3
Anonymous
2/16/18, 4:32 PM
Thank you so much for this, can't wait to see what you do next <3
Anonymous
2/16/18, 3:56 PM
After reading the whole series including the darker ones, I think I like this one more.
Anonymous
2/16/18, 3:09 PM
Very nice