Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/16/18, 3:38 AM
I hope this story can continue on for another "season" <3 loved it so much
2/16/18, 2:27 AM
Great story! I love when best friends together become something else. On a side note, if you ever watch Bob's Burgers, I have the voice of Wegner the same as Mr Fishodor when I read. The tone of speech you gave him is similar to Fishodor.
Anonymous
2/15/18, 7:22 PM
Me too. I also want Axel to turn around, defeat Diamond. And of course get Neville back!!!!
Anonymous
2/15/18, 5:58 PM
Isn’t this the one posted on mcstories?
Anonymous
2/15/18, 5:03 PM
For some reason i kinda hope Alex will turn into a verry cruel men that even diamond will be impressed by I dont know why
2/15/18, 2:55 PM
Absman420 here! Yes, a motor home — an RV. They cross the country solving crimes and getting into erotic situations! Call Netflix — that’s a series!
2/15/18, 2:49 PM
Wow. That was a hot alternate ending. Mean, very mean, but hot. This one didnt seem nearly as straight forward as the first version. Which leaves me a little torn as to which I like better. I love a happy ending, but also love a hot ending. Awesome work, M!
Anonymous
2/15/18, 8:10 AM
The ending I really wanted! Thanks so much. Would love to see more of this.
Big Mike
2/15/18, 7:15 AM
"finally I figured a car"... not a car, a motorhome! I figure some kind of innocuous appearing vehicle like a Winnebago that in fact contains the most nocuous formula. The Trojan horse o' lust. Ah well, it's your story and thanks again for sharing. If it never goes farther, no worries.
Anonymous
2/15/18, 6:18 AM
Did not like this ending. I get sick and tried of evil winning. Prefer the first ending.