Recent Comments

OU812
5/13/17, 9:28 PM
This is a grade "A" horror story. It is sexy, but the sex only adds to the scary, sadness. The pilot is well crafted, my concern and fascination had me reading like my life depended on it!
Martin
5/13/17, 9:25 PM
Great story. Now for the next one - the stupid, redneck white man turns into a smart, hunk, (black), gay doctor..
EdIam
5/13/17, 8:35 PM
No worries, y'all. I'm gonna keep writing. These Jerry stories are literally written in a day. Very stream of consciousness writings. The way I look at it, Jerry is a demon with no sense of good at all. It's all on the table when it comes to what he'll do. So, I understand completely if it's too dark and not pleasurable for some. It's just a fun character to write, wherever he takes me!
Anonymous
5/13/17, 8:06 PM
Great ending. I would love to see more. Maybe showing Josh turning more people. I look forward to it
5/13/17, 5:14 PM
Many thanks, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:31 PM
Don't usually post here, but just wanted to make my opinion known after reading these comments.... lol Please don't stop writing stories like these if the muse hits you. I don't think it's too dark at all, and enjoyed the read!
May 12, 2017
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:16 PM
Great story...
UchihaDEMS
5/13/17, 4:14 PM
To each his own. I mean, it was amazingly written, described and all... hot as well, but I think maybe the mother part was too much. Don't get me wrong, this makes it more realistic I think? Anyway, I would love to keep on reading. And you should write what you feel like. You got talen so keep it up!
Anonymous
5/13/17, 3:28 PM
I agree a little dark i guess especially the mother scenario
Anonymous
5/13/17, 3:23 PM
This one got really dark - so datk that there was no pleasure for me reading despite, as mentioned above, it being very well and eloquently written.