Recent Comments

Martin
5/13/17, 9:25 PM
Great story. Now for the next one - the stupid, redneck white man turns into a smart, hunk, (black), gay doctor..
EdIam
5/13/17, 8:35 PM
No worries, y'all. I'm gonna keep writing. These Jerry stories are literally written in a day. Very stream of consciousness writings. The way I look at it, Jerry is a demon with no sense of good at all. It's all on the table when it comes to what he'll do. So, I understand completely if it's too dark and not pleasurable for some. It's just a fun character to write, wherever he takes me!
Anonymous
5/13/17, 8:06 PM
Great ending. I would love to see more. Maybe showing Josh turning more people. I look forward to it
5/13/17, 5:14 PM
Many thanks, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:31 PM
Don't usually post here, but just wanted to make my opinion known after reading these comments.... lol Please don't stop writing stories like these if the muse hits you. I don't think it's too dark at all, and enjoyed the read!
May 12, 2017
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:16 PM
Great story...
UchihaDEMS
5/13/17, 4:14 PM
To each his own. I mean, it was amazingly written, described and all... hot as well, but I think maybe the mother part was too much. Don't get me wrong, this makes it more realistic I think? Anyway, I would love to keep on reading. And you should write what you feel like. You got talen so keep it up!
Anonymous
5/13/17, 3:28 PM
I agree a little dark i guess especially the mother scenario
Anonymous
5/13/17, 3:23 PM
This one got really dark - so datk that there was no pleasure for me reading despite, as mentioned above, it being very well and eloquently written.
Anonymous
5/13/17, 2:38 PM
I like the premise... I hope you do something HOT with it