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Anonymous
10/2/15, 5:23 PM
that was a waste of my time reading it please no more trivia
Anonymous
10/2/15, 6:08 AM
Oh no!!! This has just got to be continued!! Super hot!
The guy who made this shit
10/2/15, 4:17 AM
And regarding the comment About the stereotypes well I happen to know some aussies, and I'm aware they aren't all "illiterate bushman" . And I happen to wear a hawaiian shirt to all funerals
Anonymous
10/2/15, 4:14 AM
Has anyone really been far as decided to use even go want to do look more like?
The guy who made this shit
10/2/15, 4:12 AM
Thanks for the Feedback. Honestly don't think I'll redo this ,but You folks are all welcome to. With any changes or modifications you want I didn't really intend this as a Solid fantasy. more so a premis. That I haven't seen much of I hope this inspires some of the better Writers, to make more fantasys with a similar premise. (of guys go someplace end up going native as one of you said)
Anonymous
10/2/15, 2:56 AM
LOL! I love Xorvax's cockiness. :)
Anonymous
10/2/15, 1:48 AM
Awesome!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 9:20 PM
The clue is in the title: a bogan is an unsophisticated / redneck Australian. You may as well complain about a hillbilly being stereotyped
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:52 PM
Not offended, but if I would want to be, I'd find the American guy a horrible 'ugly American' stereotype. Then again, this sets the reader up with glee and anticipation at his fate.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:29 PM
Poor grammar. Too many stereotypes. It looks like you had a harder time learning the English language than you did finding out about Aussies. Us Aussies aren't all illiterate bushmen and blokes you know.