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Jan 10, 2006
Joey
11/24/15, 10:39 PM
Wonderful story! Can't wait for more :)
Anonymous
11/24/15, 8:13 PM
Hard to figure how Derek can improve on this one, but here's hoping for something at least as good when he gets around to posting another story. (How bout it, bro?)
UniformMr
11/24/15, 6:31 PM
"The first thing he noticed was that he looked younger, much younger, and shorter too by at least a foot." Wow, so he's only about 5'4". Please keep writing! I love the idea of him being a rentboy, trapped in a muscle toy body....maybe also working as a erotic dancer, porn star. Please keep him mentally fighting his programming....being controlled and helpless is hot, Hot, HOT!
Anonymous
11/24/15, 2:02 PM
This story is so cool for a fetish like me
Trylithin
11/24/15, 1:55 PM
This is really sweet, in a dark, twisted sort of way. I loved it.
JasCo
11/24/15, 12:32 PM
I'd also suggest this would be great turned into an episodic series of scenes at a porn studio like Men.com. They are currently doing one based on a cult so this would be quite hot, though it would need to be shortened to fit a scene I guess.
JasCo
11/24/15, 12:26 PM
Oh and I love how the hypnotism kinda makes the boys think they giving in and actually choosing to like what is happening rather than their will just being taken suddenly from them.
JasCo
11/24/15, 12:25 PM
So glad there is another chapter finally; it has bee one of my favourite stories on the site.
Anonymous
11/24/15, 10:10 AM
Awesome and hot story! Can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
11/24/15, 9:23 AM
Moar please, this is one of the best stories read in a while