Recent Comments

jake fox
11/10/15, 7:55 PM
Thank you I was hoping it would be better, and I knew I had spelled pendulum wrong, sometimes I'm unsure of the correct spelling even when it's right in front of me lol, thank you for the correct spelling as I'm sure I will need it again as my story progresses :-) I hope it didn't spoil your enjoyment to much
dougkent60
11/10/15, 7:29 PM
a great resubmit and looking good, but may I suggest the use of the spellgchecker Pensilum=pendulum
Kka
11/10/15, 7:21 PM
So f**king hot! This was perfect!
the suitedsubmissive
11/10/15, 7:08 PM
VERY great rework! Love that there's a little more background. Cannot wait to read more!
jake fox
11/10/15, 4:46 PM
Thank you all for your comments, I have taken advice and have 're-written the story starting from a new beginning but will come to the same conclusion I had originally envisioned. I hope you all enjoy the revised story
Anonymous
11/10/15, 4:38 PM
Please continue. I Love the humiliation Rob is undergoing and hope for much more. I do agree that it might be moving a bit fast, though. I'd love to see him humiliated in his fine suit at the office, like the poster below mentioned! Either way, great start.
Anonymous
11/10/15, 3:00 PM
This is not copyright to Erik the Ready
Anonymous
11/10/15, 3:00 PM
This is not copyright to Erik the Ready
Anonymous
11/10/15, 3:00 PM
This is not copyright to Erik the Ready
Anonymous
11/10/15, 2:59 PM
A story written by me (Rik) and not Erik the Ready