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Anonymous
11/10/15, 2:59 PM
A story written by me (Rik) and not Erik the Ready
Anonymous
11/10/15, 2:58 PM
This story was written by me and Not Erik the Ready. Don't mind it being posted but object to someone else putting their nbame to it.
Anonymous
11/10/15, 9:56 AM
I'm not looking forward the next chapter.
Anonymous
11/10/15, 6:32 AM
you have to continue i want more i need more . wish i was rob love story please don't stop
Anonymous
11/10/15, 5:36 AM
would be better if he gets humiliated in the office especially in his nice expensive suit... That would be more humiliating... The transition a little too fast. Its not really humiliation unless many others (such as his friends or colleagues) that used to know him as someone that is successful and is now eagerly submissive and enjoys being a slave...
Anonymous
11/10/15, 3:17 AM
This is one of the greatest stories on this site.
Anonymous
11/10/15, 3:15 AM
A nice start. Personally, I like longer transitions. What was Dr. Jackson saying during the session that would make Rob more submissive? A possible "backstory" would be that Rob doesn't like blacks, or is even subtlely racist to start out, which would make the humiliation all the more effective. Also, Rob keeps asking "Why was I doing this?" I think it's more effective if the subject has some idea of what's going on, if he experiences some kind of stimulation or keyword that triggers his behavior - that makes it more interesting, rather than a sudden change. Think of the way a sculptor or a painter very gradually creates a visual image. So too, an author has to summon language and ideas to create a unique story. Go for it.
Anonymous
11/10/15, 12:32 AM
I've looked all over the internet for the bubble series with no luck! Please if someone knows the author, ask him to repost.
Anonymous
11/9/15, 6:04 PM
Look forward to next chapter