Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/30/15, 6:56 AM
This is just sooooo awesome!
TimNJ
10/30/15, 4:34 AM
Oh yes, the father needs to be totally corrupted!
scudder
10/30/15, 3:25 AM
You've got in these 4 chapters a very interesting story, potentially a lot of sexy fun, with some unique twists. However, in several places it's really hard to follow either as erotica and especially if it's stroke fic. I suspect you've been influenced by "American Horror Story" and the Brannagh movie "Dead Again"! I hope you'll go back, edit it and decide what you want it to be, but I'm very happy you did post a complete story.
Anonymous
10/30/15, 12:12 AM
Would be really good to see Brody's father fall under the effect of the drugs and becoming the coach's pet.
Kk
10/29/15, 7:26 PM
Yes a happy ending. We get so few of those. Thank you for this and I hope to hear more from you
Anonymous
10/29/15, 2:32 PM
Glad you wrote a new chapter - wonderful!
JD
10/29/15, 3:30 AM
Welcome back! I didn't even read it yet, getting to that, but I want to thank u for continuing the story.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 9:55 PM
Great muscle descriptions! Story/narrative gets a bit jumbled at the end, since you are trying to resolve the original "2 guys from Boston" story along with Dr. Hart and his muscle boy club and then Damien and his demons....lot of plot threads here. Maybe some editing to sort things into distinct story lines would help. It is becoming a bit "stream of consciousness" and confusing to follow at the end.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 9:18 PM
Well written and the flashback was well executed. However, wasn't he interrupting the narrator? Was the narrator going to tell him that he made him break up with his girl friend -- or did that just "happen"? Intriguing.
Anonymous
10/27/15, 3:26 PM
Please write more of these. It seems like a wonderful series. All of the things I find most arousing in one story!