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8/8/24, 7:55 PM
Again, let me add my praise to that above. Great story, so many possibilities and all horny. Keep up the great work. Thank you!

8/9/24, 10:26 AM
@[Blackscar](/user/show/10036989) Thank you so so much! And you are absolutely right! There are so many horny possibilities and scenarios and hopefully, I managed to capture them all in their full glory as we move forward! lol
8/8/24, 3:32 PM
Looks like Brandon is finally embracing his calling! Thanks for another hot chapter. With Brandon letting the older men worship him and even telling them to is the coach going to go deeper with the hypnotic suggestions? Giving more advice or having Brandon eager not only to let them worship him but possibly give him orders to help them out too? Curious to see where this goes or if this is the end game for Brandon to be the competitive swimmer that Coach is helping him become haha. Thanks again!

8/9/24, 10:25 AM
@[AxelCyclone](/user/show/44164) Hi Axel, Thank you for commenting! Like I mentioned to Izzy, I'm writing this story for the long haul (chapter 13 just dropped on my patreon) and no spoilers but Brandon is going to be pulled in several directions in the chapters to cum. :P
Anonymous
8/9/24, 7:34 AM
Please more chapters!!!
8/9/24, 7:03 AM
Very strong start eager to see mote chapters
8/9/24, 5:46 AM
Gotta love the email hypnoslave file!
8/8/24, 11:38 PM
So hot. Can’t wait for the next one
5/17/24, 1:57 PM
Hey, y'all. Had a very busy and stressful few months, so I didn't get much writing done, but now I'm finally taking some time off, so I hope to churn more chapters out now. We'll see how it goes. But I'm definitely not giving up on the story.

Anonymous
5/20/24, 7:21 PM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) Phew so glad you’re not giving up on this story.

8/8/24, 11:12 PM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) Love everything about this story so far. Can't wait to see if thing develop with Dane
8/8/24, 10:08 PM
I did not expect this ending but i want to applaud you for it. This was super sweet! I would love to see more but I'm okay if it ends here. Maybe do a spin off with the tennis player? He seemed fun.

8/8/24, 10:37 PM
@[AClosetBear](/user/show/474190) I'm glad you liked the ending, I know it's not the norm for this site but Coach Austin was never about control, he just wanted Berry to do and give his best for the team and himself. I thought about making the ending more open so maybe he dates Coach, maybe not but no matter what happens with Austin they needed to have a talk now that they were more equals. I might even write Coach's side to all this, show that and maybe their sit down.
8/8/24, 9:08 PM
I love a good, realistic induction story. It rides that line between consensual and nonconsensual, which (in a story, and in fantasies) makes it even hotter. I prefer piss kink to be "straight from the tap", myself, and I can't really grasp what the Master is getting out of the bedwetting, but I'm sure we'll see. That last scene does leave things open for a shift in perspective, to read about what's going through James's mind about the whole experience (I enjoy the rationalizations and the discovery of new feelings very much), but so far there haven't been any concrete suggestions beyond dropping into trance, feeling safe and aroused, and the Good Boy triggers. Nothing that James would even necessarily be consciously aware of. So I imagine it would be better to keep things from the tist's perspective until that changes. Great job! I'm looking forward to more.