Recent Comments

8/31/25, 6:51 PM
Great Ideas, great writing, great story so far. Please keep writing. I love this story and hope that the next part will be coming soon.
Aug 31, 2025
8/31/25, 5:46 PM
Great story! Loved the baseball player scene. How much do those windows cost, exactly??? I'll take a dozen of them!
Anonymous
8/31/25, 4:51 PM
Why this chapter is too short, hope the next chapter soon
8/31/25, 3:30 PM
Absolutely loving everything about this series!
8/31/25, 3:12 PM
Oh my god this is hot. And hmmm, i could see the breadcrumbs lining up. Its not only Oby connects these stories. Very interesting. Cant wait for next weeks entry.
8/31/25, 11:53 AM
One of my favorite series so far, hope you keep writing!
Ebonart
8/31/25, 5:18 AM
So, so good. Submit, Boy Wonder!

8/31/25, 11:23 AM
@Ebonart Thank you so much. Love your stuff as well. Have acquired quite a few :-)
8/31/25, 9:36 AM
Great story. Can't wait for the next!
Aug 31, 2025
8/31/25, 9:09 AM
Loved this. Always a big fan of a simple premise that is just pulled off in such an arousing way
8/26/25, 10:54 AM
This was amazing. So much so, I had to read it a second time. The character development, the pace the story moved, and the transformation of Jake along the way. Perfection. This is in my top 3 of any story I have read here, maybe the number one spot. And it closed perfectly. Though it does leave me wondering, how Dan became the Master he became, And what life will be like for the four men as they navigate their new lives, with who they all are now. Many thanks for the story, checked all my boxes!

8/31/25, 8:52 AM
@[Will R](/user/show/10012495) I can’t tell you how much I appreciate that. Dan’s rise, and what life looks like for all of them afterward, are things I’ve thought about too. We’ll see what might come one day, but knowing the story struck you this deeply makes the journey feel worthwhile. Thank you again for such kind words.