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Anonymous
12/4/25, 5:06 PM
Don't like rhe steroids. Also feel he has become too dim of at this point.
12/4/25, 4:51 PM
Really glad you like the longer format and the character development. I pondered for a long time before putting stories on the site. I crossed my fingers that there would be other readers like me who appreciate a more detailed back story. My hope was that the “suspension of disbelief” could hug the line between what is possible and what is probable 🤭 I love the newbie genre but as an older guy who has become no less submissive over time, I wondered if there might be an audience for more mature characters who had lives outside of their sex lives. Sexy and beautiful relationships cover a huge diversity in reality and I have always liked to see that reflected in fiction. Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking time to comment.
Neat idea. Develop more?
12/4/25, 7:08 AM
The story is mostly setup. The co-dependence rules are established. It feels like it is just missing the meat of a story like this. Every plot development happened either before the story started or implied after the story ended.

12/4/25, 2:50 PM
@Neat idea. Develop more? Appreciate the feedback! The constant juggling for me is weighing how much time I have versus how in depth to go in a story. For this one, if I had gone through everything in detail it would’ve ended up novella length, which just isn’t in the schedule. I liked the idea, though, so I wanted to put something down that would give folks a starting point for their imaginations to run with. (I also never rule out diving back in at some point in another chapter.)
12/4/25, 12:15 PM
So great!!! :star_struck:
12/4/25, 8:39 AM
Well done my friend

12/4/25, 8:59 AM
@[Margrave](/user/show/10044380) Thank you so much
11/11/25, 1:48 PM
So well-written and hot despite the absence of sex. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

12/4/25, 6:19 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Apologies for the delayed response. Thank you for reading and enjoying the story. I'm a no sex author by nature, but I appreciate you liking the work.
12/4/25, 5:57 AM
I hope there's a part two where Case gets fucked by Tom.
Anonymous
12/4/25, 3:29 AM
Very very sexy and we'll written. I wish you include more about Bellamy's ass in tight clothes. A hardcore scene involving neural pounding.
12/4/25, 1:31 AM
Maybe I'm just being optimistic here, but i really like the framing that the hero hasn't actually failed. He can still hold on to his ideals/"defeat" the dragon by making it so the dragon never wants to leave or do harm again. Its a positive and kind of uplifting spin on what could be a pretty bleak "evil wins" story.
12/4/25, 12:09 AM
Okay - there were a couple of tears again. Master Wayne and Johnnie - SUCH refreshing characters for erotic fiction. They’re almost non-existent in this genre and I commend you!! I’m conditioned to envision a submissive character as being a newbie in his 20s. When you remind us that Johnnie is older, my heart skips a beat and draws me in even more. And I absolutely love that you tied in The Pound! Was a joy to see the stories overlap. What I andmire about your stories is that…yes, technically they’re erotic fiction. But I almost forget that because it actually feels like a glimpse into their lives and not just something you conjured to induce a boner. You let the reader really get to know these characters. They have depth. They have arcs. They evolve and grow. Also, I’m assuming that you know a bit about neuroscience and the subconscious mind? When you write about some of the science behind the hypnosis and programming, you take us right to the edge of the suspension of disbelief without throwing us off the cliff. Maybe you’re pulling jargon out of your arse and making it all up, but it sure reads as though Master Wayne’s research has some legitimacy to it and he’s ahead of our time. I appreciate that your stories aren’t about brainwashing or turning your main characters into something they’re not, ie converting them from straight to gay. They have that submissive part buried within. What they are put through is actually healing and allows them to live authentically. Can’t say enough good things!!