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12/5/25, 1:06 AM
I like the ambiguity in this of whether Chris was actually going to help him/feeding the curse breaks it, or if Chris was just luring in cursed nubbed twinks to fuck. Well done.

12/5/25, 2:34 AM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Ah! Love your writing, means a lot ❤️
12/4/25, 9:25 PM
Fuck that was hot! But who imprinted who? Can’t wait to read more. Great story. The whole setup of how the studio filmed porn was amazing.

12/5/25, 2:23 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks! Appreciate the feedback and I'm starting to work on what happened to Billy's friend Brock who was waiting at the studio for him.
12/5/25, 1:58 AM
Rereading the ending here, I'm thinking that maybe the World going white is Jamie's power erupting to smack down Dauntless...We can hope, I guess.
12/5/25, 1:39 AM
GH ID - 1493566 I have a concern, why is it that the drop rate of mythic shards is really low? It's almost like impossible to get the character at all.
12/5/25, 12:35 AM
Awww, I know that wasn't the point, but having the dad, the main antagonist of... Basically the whole thing, get his way kinda killed the story for me. I get that this is what we were leading up to, but the dad's swagger and possessiveness kept on annoying me, to the point that I hoped that he wouldn't win. All that aside, your writing is horrendously good. And I mean that in the best way possible. Please, make another story, I'm begging!

12/5/25, 1:15 AM
@[Alexio. R](/user/show/10064829) There will be more developments in their relationship before the story's over, just you wait! Also, I have quite a few other stories on my Substack (@Freckleman64) in case you'd like to check it out. I'm in the middle of one right now called House Boy that I've written and posted about seven chapters of.
12/5/25, 1:02 AM
Just wow
12/4/25, 10:42 PM
I really loved most the ghost fucking that Hunter got pretty early on in this story; it reminded me of one of bluesuedewho's stories a couple years back, one that actually torpedoed a story I'd written because it was so much better than what I'd been doing, so please see that as the compliment it is :-)

12/5/25, 12:49 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I’m so glad! There’s gonna be a lot of ghostfucking and just general phantom erotic weirdness during this series, I’m excited to share it and I think it’ll all be very fun for readers.
12/4/25, 11:11 PM
Glad to see more of this!!
12/4/25, 10:40 PM
I've been really enjoying this story! Thank you!
12/4/25, 1:07 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this series. Very inventive. My only concern is that the over-powering nature of 'The Fire' might detract from the story as a whole. As an aside, I have only very recently dipped my toe in the 'AI Pond'. Until I read Corin's comment, I had no idea AI was involved. So what supposedly indicates 'AI Prose'? And what is 'Contains AI patterns' and how does it different from 'AI Assisted'? Also, are you using ChatGPT, your own GPT, or is there another one out there that is more suited to erotica? Thanks. Oh, and keep up the good work!

12/4/25, 11:34 AM
@[Aaelefein](/user/show/914471) Thank you for your kind words. It's very inspiring and motivating! In my understanding, "AI prose" means repeating plot points with different words, overexaggerating words that are out of context, inconsistent details, and anything that interferes with normal storytelling. The version of AI that I used in this story heavily used em dashes. There are hundreds of em dashes in the original output. If you read more closely, you may find unnatural colons, overly long insertion sentences, and piled-up adjectives. I edited most em dashes out and split sentences, but it seems that wasn't enough. So I am re-editing the remaining two chapters, making them more natural to read. The main frame of this story was inspired by a chat I had with ChatGPT. We discussed the overall lore and main plot, like what this _fire_ can or can't do and the personal traits of each character. Then I wrote a more detailed plot as a prompt and fed it into Grok. Grok is very open to erotic themes, as long as all participants are voluntary and no minors are included. After getting those raw outputs, I edited out the unnatural parts - tons of em dashes, for example - to make it more like erotica rather than dream talk. (The original outputs more like the last sentence.)

12/4/25, 10:32 PM
@[DestinSalvatore](/user/show/1962140) Good, good - Thanks! Haven't come across the problem of to many em-dashes, but then I use them and ellipsis quite often even before I came across GPT. Don't plan on letting GPT write my stories though - I'll write a chapter first, then let it do clean up, check for inconsistencies and contradictions, and suggest content that I wouldn't come up with on my own... I'm very poor with emotional and humor stuff. Great with the technical/scientific stuff though. Grok seems to have the same limitations as ChatGPT - no biggie there. Thanks much.