Recent Comments

3/1/24, 6:55 AM
Hot! Definitely leaves me wanting more! 2 remy’s maybe he inadvertently flips the script. ;)
3/1/24, 5:51 AM
That was so hot.
3/1/24, 5:38 AM
Very hot
Anonymous
3/1/24, 5:31 AM
amazingly hot chapter with equally hot images… really enjoyed the conversion of Davis too!!! looking forward to the story continuing…
Anonymous
3/1/24, 4:22 AM
Can't wait to see more!
3/1/24, 3:49 AM
Damn! What a great start and interesting premise! I feel like there is so much room for unexpected twists and turns!
3/1/24, 3:19 AM
Im hooked and cant wait to read more of it.
3/1/24, 2:01 AM
Damn. That was hot
3/1/24, 1:22 AM
I tried writing a poem once and it was a boring failure. That took much metal strain , I determined that poetry wasn't my gig. You took something we are all familiar with and many know by heart, and homo-phized it. Funny and true to the Clement C. Moore's original. Rhyming everything nicely and in meter must have been a task! I know I'm late in commenting but just came across this today. I'm very impressed! TJK