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12/3/25, 3:13 AM
You have MANY amazing stories that I've gone back to in the past...many...but this may be my new favorite!!!

12/3/25, 4:17 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Always an honor to get a comment from you Edlam!

12/3/25, 4:32 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) <3 Are you kidding? You've earned the status of icon within our erotic gay hypno community with your talent! I love seeing you back and sharing more of your twisted stories with us. You're phenomenally talented. And I LOVE the added work you put into your picture collages <3

12/3/25, 4:37 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) 😍🥰😘❤️
Anonymous
12/3/25, 3:58 AM
This was great! I especially loved the ending. Keep the stories coming!
KSfaggot
12/3/25, 3:42 AM
I am sobbing. I couldn’t stop reading.
12/3/25, 2:37 AM
Great story! More please!
9/17/22, 7:52 PM
Statement withdrawn

9/17/22, 8:18 PM
@Stroppy Author Hello, thank you very much for commenting, all comments and constructive criticism are welcome and I appreciate them very much. First of all, it means a lot to me that you think it's well written. Being English my non-native language, I try very hard to do quality work for all of you, and I'm glad to know you think so. Oh, man, I’m surprised, I honestly didn't think the story was so dark and hopeless! I thought I'd managed to make clear Kyle’s guilty pleasure he’s experiencing, and that a big part of what's happening to him is so tortuous, because in some degree that he refuses to admit to himself, he's actually enjoying in part what's going on, and that he’s definitely having the best sex he ever had. That was my intention in chapter 12 with the meeting of the three Kyles: the conflict between his morality, his reality and his animal instincts. I'm sorry I have not been clear on that. This is my first story, so I totally accept that it may have flaws like that. And in fact some of what you’re saying (the enjoyment of the victims) appears better explores in chapter 14, which I’m already working on. But of course I take the criticism, and I respect your decision not to continue reading it. I will keep all of that in mind. Again, thanks a lot for the feedback, buddy!

11/30/25, 1:26 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) It's a pity there is no continuation 😔 Is it possible to read this story somewhere? Do you publish it in your language anywhere?

@Plymouth58
12/3/25, 1:29 AM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Hi! I'm so sorry I haven't been able to continue the story. It's incredible that so much time has passed; it's the biggest writer's block I've ever had. The worst part is, I know how the story goes, I know what I want to write, but I've reached the point where I'm bogged down in a major plot point, and I'm terribly stuck. I think being left to write alone without any extra support is what got me stuck. I must have written a dozen variations already, but it's really complicated because the story keeps going in the wrong direction. Believe me, I'm trying to get back on track, but oh, it's so difficult! The job change from employee to freelancer hasn't made things any easier either; I used to write on my way to work. I'm still working on the next chapterl, but I can't seem to develop talk between Terry and T-Bone properly. It's really the ending of the first act and the start of the second one, where things get terribly out of control for the heroes, so it had to be made well. I'm confident that by fixing that, I'll be able to continue.
12/2/25, 10:45 PM
This was a really intriguing premise, a perfect way to play with one of those 'it's no one's fault, but now we're (literally) stuck with this' dynamics. Good thing Stan was right and they basically were a couple that just needed to realise it. Even if they had a bond at the start it was fun to see it develop as things went on, Brian's dream becoming their dream. And merged sex must be... intense, yeah. I did see a number of tfs/merges you've enjoyed in the past making an appearance here, hope you had fun writing this story! Though I can't imagine what it's like being Hugh, having a mindlink with eight people would be a lot.
12/2/25, 10:32 PM
Definitely a good read and lined up with things I often write about. I wish you had actually broken the sections up and published them one by one. I assume there will be more as it has the series heading on it.
12/2/25, 9:51 PM
Hot!
12/2/25, 8:40 PM
As others have said, it has been too long since we've had a twink and nub based story. Everything from the title to the progression to the way he changes his mind is on point. I almost lost the challenge. Kinda wish I did.

12/2/25, 9:21 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) thanks for reading. happy to give the world a few more nubs ;)
12/2/25, 9:14 PM
Fantastic story!