Recent Comments

Malemann54
8/29/23, 4:27 PM
You mentioned before that English was not your first language and a couple of points on how you describe clothes. First off, is it really necessary for you to talk about the characters regular clothes? When you call clothes "social" I think you mean dress clothes as opposed to casual clothes, also unless one is talking about a dress military uniform a man's shirt is never called a blouse. Otherwise the story itself is great, keep up the good work.

9/3/23, 2:22 PM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) Thank u for the tips! The description is just part of the writing process to help the readers to imagine the scene. But sometimes, even I forget doing it hahaha <3

Malemann54
9/4/23, 11:48 PM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Just wanted to go into more detail to describe clothes. Is it really necessary to describe the character's street clothes? It doesn't seem to add anything to the story, keep on with the descriptions of their fetish wear. Ways to describe men's clothes, dress, formal, work, casual, and sport. Also in your first story when I commented on your use of the term "mydear" what I meant to say is that no American man would address another so unless he was intimate or flirting with him. The term "my dear" would be considered both old fashioned and effemanine.

9/5/23, 11:30 AM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) I'm using your tips on the next chapter. I said It was part of the reading process, but I understand that the "treatment" wear add more to the story than the street wear. Keep commenting please! All of you are helping me a lot to improve my stories!! ♥️♥️
9/5/23, 10:12 AM
love this new chapter. I hope Archie King and Buck and his Dad would make an appearance too just like Mav did.
Hinner
9/1/23, 6:29 PM
I tried entering the codes and none of them worked... :c

9/3/23, 3:19 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Both should be able to use now since both events are happening now.

Gay Harem
9/4/23, 6:46 AM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Hey! They should work now. Tell me your ID, please :relaxed:

Hinner
9/4/23, 8:00 AM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Hey, they did work! Thanks!!! My ID is 1191188

Gay Harem
9/5/23, 5:59 AM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Rewards! :heart_eyes:
James
9/5/23, 4:58 AM
Can't wait to read the next one, I am loving this.
mic
9/5/23, 4:13 AM
fucking great story, super ideas, hot written, nice tricking and light blackmail, more please, great surprising end, my favorit would be if alex would be hard by the humilating, want to be nick slave and his brothers, and fuck and be together with aiden and they sell his ass more, and evtl feminisate him - give him dress and big tits implants and make him their muscle himbo bitch
9/5/23, 4:03 AM
Outstanding chapter! So hot! I love the contentment the team members feel finding their place too. A clear rank in the hierarchy. The desire, the right, to be bred by those above and plant their seed in those below.
James
9/5/23, 3:58 AM
Damn why can't I be that Lucky?
9/4/23, 4:48 PM
I just continue to love this story so much -- though damnit, everyone, get with the god sex romp and have unbridled fun with it until it all comes crashing down around them!

9/4/23, 9:07 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) What could possibly go wrong with an unbridled god sex romp? :wink:

9/5/23, 3:32 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) So many wonderful things can go so delightfully wrong... ;-)
James
9/5/23, 3:15 AM
I've must say this is by far one of the best stories I have read. Now I'm worried for poor Sammy, maybe he needs to explain why he's afraid to submit. Of course in my case I'd only want to submit.
9/4/23, 3:28 AM
This was a great start and I'm excited to see where you're taking this. My personal hope is that their original master sees through this and gets the upper-hand on these guys; or maybe the master is using the two as bait, foreseeing this enemy's plans.

9/5/23, 12:37 AM
@[Tempest888](/user/show/908611) "the masters" (both for Trevor/Liam and for the unnamed ones) seemed to be framed as pretty tyrannical and petty, so my guess is an end where all "the masters" lose

9/5/23, 2:42 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) True, but I felt that wouldn't be the safest ending for Trevor and Liam. At least their current masters let them have a relationship together. I just want them to be a pair of happy, hypnotized, himbos together~