Recent Comments

6/9/23, 12:35 AM
I love this series and Ethan so much. There's something almost sinister about Ethan's combination of traits, as if a trickster god had placed a particularly subtle curse on him. I adore it. It's also got this fun little slapstick/farce thing going for it. Anyone who was giving you low marks for writing must have been confused at the lack of typos or bad grammar in the story....

6/13/23, 5:28 PM
Eh, there’s no accounting for personal taste. I’ve got no grudge; just enough vanity to make a public plea for clarity ;) @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)
6/4/23, 1:37 AM
This was so damn cute. I had a blast reading it, and I think you may have had a blast writing it. ;-)

6/13/23, 5:27 PM
Thanks, @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)! This was a fun one to piece together for sure. Glad you enjoyed :)
Apr 18, 2013
6/13/23, 1:37 PM
You failed to remove the slaves body hair as all slaves are hairless!
Anonymous
6/13/23, 12:31 PM
Best story in all of GSS Martin can vouch ;5
Anonymous
6/13/23, 10:47 AM
Very appropriate title: how far the mighty have fallen! I too am enjoying this very much. I keep reminding myself that Billy WAS, at some point, a VICTIM -- Jake's VICTIM. I would LOVE to see a flashback of that exact moment. I want to see when Billy turned from a willing participant (he must've been at some point), to the point when he said 'enough' but Jake didn't listen, to the point that he vowed to take vengeance on Jake to meticulously plan his downfall. Without these background for me, Billy is just annoying after he pop Jake's cherry. Just my take.

6/13/23, 12:03 PM
@Anonymous I do get what you mean. Billy has taken his to a whole other level. This has always been Jake…and now Matt’s story and I’ll probably stick with that for now, but Ia spinoff/flashback tale is definitely something to consinder
Boomer
6/13/23, 11:38 AM
Yesss been waiting for this. Genuinely the best story on here - plenty of plot without sacrificing sexiness, and perfect justification for why a drone life sounds like heaven
6/13/23, 4:36 AM
Hot
6/13/23, 4:28 AM
Absolutely lovely and I am happy to see the story continue!
6/13/23, 3:11 AM
I love Jamie's dream sequence at the beginning. I wonder if Master used the actual memories of DH-03 to form the dream? We get to see a Brute in action for the first time. We also get hints of two new drones types - DCs and DGs. Then there's that great "daily conditioning" sequence. The rest is exposition and setup, but good lead in to what's to come. Yet another superb chapter.