Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/15/18, 6:21 AM
> Well, since you insist on posting stories, let me be the first to say that your writing style sucks. Your grammar is non-existent and your spelling is childish. I don’t even know which character is speaking during the dialogues. The premise is okay, but, you’re not even taking the time to edit. Just run Spell and Grammar Check on MSWord. It takes all of three minutes. I forget there's always that one asshole who loves to criticize peoples work on a free website. One quick tip for the helpful editor. The but in your fourth sentence doesn't work as an interrupter. Sure, it checks off all the boxes when you run it through your grammar checker, but the sentence, 'The premise is okay you're not even taking the time to edit.' isn't the message you're trying to convey.

Anonymous
6/7/23, 6:26 AM
@Anonymous i agree with that comment
Anonymous
12/14/18, 9:18 PM
i love this story line from your tumblr. I am looking forward to see new stories and hopefully some adaptation to this page's format. Photos are not necessarily fit with mobile. Straight to gay is nice but hope to see gay to straight, a jocked gay liberal smart protagonist would willingly trick his lover or friends and forced them to become straight football jocks to increase team members, following Coach's order.

Anonymous
6/7/23, 6:25 AM
@Anonymous my question is which football
Anonymous
3/9/22, 4:39 AM
wow cada dia me sorprendes mas con tus historias son geniales 💪👍👏😻

Anonymous
6/7/23, 5:54 AM
@Anonymous wow every day you surprise me more with your stories they are great < thats the translation
12/9/18, 10:01 AM
have you written this story on tumblr? i seemed to have read it somewhere before.

Anonymous
6/7/23, 5:52 AM
@Makingthingsbetter the first part is on tumblr but the other parts are'nt i hope you enjoy our day
6/7/23, 5:25 AM
This was a fun addition to the frat. Very clever play on the greased-up dick idea too.
6/7/23, 5:22 AM
This was really sweet. I really enjoyed it. The mind-messing and also the choice. Then to top it off, a lovely, wholesome ending.
6/3/23, 8:58 PM
As a cyclist (who chafes), this novel had an authenticity that I loved. There's nothing quite as erotic as a peloton preparing to ride, smearing their saddle pads with creamy lube and putting chapstick on their nipples. I'm hard before I ride every time! Great story!!!

6/6/23, 11:17 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks. And don't forget the guys who rub a big dollop of chamois butter down their crotch.

6/6/23, 11:27 PM
@[Charles](/user/show/133715) I said the same thing. (I’m one of those guys for centuries but not for short rides)
6/6/23, 11:25 PM
Loved lt
6/3/23, 11:45 AM
I SUBMITTED to reading this story the second I knew there was nipple play in it. And I wasn't disappointed. Well written. Just enough backstory. Interesting dynamic. My only complaint is that I want more. Oh, and love the cum eating as well.

6/6/23, 11:20 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Thank you---very kind words.
Hank
6/3/23, 5:34 PM
The nipple massage was the hook for me. Then the slow gradual mind control was the reel. I found the story incredibly arousing. The blow job was very sensually written. I am extremely sorry the fuck was not included. I’m sure it would have been sensational. Thank you for an exciting read!

6/6/23, 11:20 PM
@Hank Thanks. And thanks for your gracious comments to my other stories. As for the scene that did not happen; well, some things are best left to the imagination. Or feel free to edit my story as desired and publish it.