Recent Comments

1/3/23, 1:18 AM
Really enjoyed the story. Especially loved the twist at the end. It gave Brandon some much needed agency and tied the whole thing together into a causative chain. Really nice. I also really liked your characters and how you introduced them. Isaac's introduction was hilarious but told us quite a bit about his "world" so to speak, and introducing Brandon together with his father did the same for him. Okay, I'll stop summarizing the story haha. But yes, I liked that each of your characters had clearly defined and separated personalities. (We talked about this in DM. So I'm not going too much into detail here.) One aspect I didn't quite like and found both unnecessary and a little bit upsetting to the narrative itself was the whole thing with the professor Holst. It adds a darker element to it that requires a more delicate touch and also didn't gel with any of the character motivations. It would have been much easier and less risky to find a date on grindr and Holst had so much to lose. Personally I would have merged Holts and Fred into one character and have him be Isaac's go-to jerk-off buddy. That aside I really liked the story and its characters and might reread again in the future. :)
1/3/23, 1:14 AM
Sounds like Rick will be just fine when Ryan goes back to school. Hopefully we’ll hear about his time with the lacrosse player.
1/3/23, 12:11 AM
Wowee. My 'Daddy Bear' challenge tag was in good hands it seems. Quick storytelling, no hanging about, and an excellent 'conceptual' merger of the three tags. Pleasantly surprised. Well executed. Loved the brevity. :thumbsup:
Martin
1/2/23, 10:32 PM
Why has it to stop now? I want to know what's happening to Colton....
1/2/23, 4:41 PM
Hopefully a part 3 comes soon

1/2/23, 11:32 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Thanks for your support and for reading the story thus far. There is a part 3 (and 4 & 5) in the works, but it won't go up until jockboy51 puts his chapter 2 up. We're planning out our stories together to make sure the universe has consistency between our works.
nycboot
1/2/23, 10:51 PM
LOL. The end reminded me of the scene in the film _Thoroughly Modern Millie_ when, observing a Jewish wedding, Dorothy (Mary Tyler Moore) remarks to an obviously chasidic man "It's Jewish!"
Martin
1/2/23, 10:14 PM
Amul, this is really amazing... pushing so many of my buttons....

1/2/23, 10:33 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! I anticipated this one would be well-received on your site. Interestingly, it's one of the more emotional less BDSM-ey chapters that got people the most excited on the abdl community site that I'm also posting this on. Different strokes and all!
Martin
1/2/23, 9:57 PM
Such a promising beginning!
Martin
1/2/23, 9:51 PM
Please continue soon!