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Zai
12/7/22, 8:51 AM
Ffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuccccckkkkkkkkk... That damn arena must be utterly sperminated with copious loads of jizzy-jizz-juice sprayed absolutely everywhere by the entirety of the villains & dudes watching the dominant display of Lex Luthor completely **Bitch'in** the once mighty Man of Steel! *Whew...* that was one loooonnnggg ass(fucked) sentence, lol! There's been so much kink and dominance written so far, it's rather a quandary to choose which chapter has had the most. Kink is up for grabs, but this chapter is vying for most cum-tac-u-lar displays of top dawg owning his bitch dom behaviour read, yet! And nearly usurping Lex for King-dom aggression was Rico, who finally toppled any sort of toppy-type feels from little cub (reporter), Jimmy 'the boi-bitch' Olsen! That Latin stud put the sub in submissive when he plowed, pounded AND pulverized Jimmy into a picture perfect little cock & cum crazed lil' faggot queered slut. What a show Lex & Rico gave their audience AND each other, huh??? Lex certainly enjoined watching and hearing his *sub*ordinate put the screws into the wannabe boi-top-dom, huh??? I absolutely enjoyed Jimmy finally getting a proper bitching... annnddd that it was done by a very angry, very vexed, and very dominant Rico who decimated Superman's pal Jimmy was sweet as the sweetest honey, ever! Great & powerful writing my friend! Ciao & Cheers, SuperDude! 🥂🍾🔧👅💙🖤💚👏🏼👌🏼👍🏻

12/7/22, 2:27 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI! LMAO....all about the "jizzy-jizz juice":stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THAT is a CLASSIC Z-term!:boom: YEAH...THANK YOU 4 the sincere appreciation & positive comments as this chapter was a "challenging, yet extremely satisfying" one....in that it was ALL about the balance of Lex keeping himself IN CHARGE, while really pissing off Rico, who ended taking his anger/frustration out on Jimmy (in a rigorously dominating way, of course)!!:smiling_imp: The "BIG BONUS" from this chapter was the "XXXTRA-added payoff" Lex received from watching/voyeuring Rico supremely dom Jimmy:zany_face: Many THANKS & Much GRATITUDE, my friend-- Have an AWESOME day!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Anonymous
12/7/22, 3:37 AM
this is fantastic! if you'd believe it, it was exactly the kind of thing i've been looking for for a while. your writing style is excellent as well. i completely understand if you don't write more, but if you do you will absolutely have an audience

12/7/22, 2:21 PM
@Anonymous Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. Again, I'm not sure if I have another story in me, it's not a matter of not wanting to write again, it's more about having the idea I think worthwhile and the drive to follow through. At the very least I can be happy that I've written at least one story that people enjoy.
Zai
12/7/22, 7:06 AM
**Cue Dramatic Music** 🎶Dun, Dun, Duuuuunnnnn...🎶 That... was a lot of dialogue betwixt Rico & Hugo, aka the Latin Torpedo & Dr. Strange-L♥️ve. You wrote it very well, with a very dramatic climatic resolution. I'd state with utter certainty that both participants gained from their intensive discussion; cumming to definitive answers. First, Rico gained back his memories and another notch on his figurative bedpost *Whoo-hah*, and Hugo got to ride Rico's rocket into orbit. And with your dramatic cliffhanger??? Who knows CUMMMMMMMMMM what may, huh? Why you do, SuperLex, lol! Later, Buddy! 🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀♥️🚀

12/7/22, 2:21 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Good Morning ZAI!:sun_with_face: THANKS 4 ALL the positive comments......So glad U enjoyed this chapter as well!! As you mention, the dialogue was key to "help unlock Rico's memory block" PLUS show/display how the Professor was "getting his own just desserts" as well...a "somewhat payback 4 himself" & perhaps a payback/retribution to Lex??!?!:money_mouth_face: AND.....You know how MUCH I :sparkling_heart: a well-hung cliffhanger!!! (LMFAO):smiling_imp: Who knows what's gonna happen NEXT?!?!? Only SUPALEX knows 4 sure!!:smirk_cat: Hehehe:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Have a SUPA day, my friend!:innocent:
Dec 6, 2022
12/7/22, 1:40 PM
Wow. So well written, and so subtly brought about even though we *know* where this is going. Thanks for sharing this little gem!
12/7/22, 10:18 AM
Always excited to see another swizz story! This was a bit surreal given I'm a therapist myself... but still a great read! You always have a great way at showcasing the mental obliviousness without making it too obvious. Would love to see some form of sequel to this if you need you could, whether that's a continuation with these two or maybe this character interacting with another therapist like Rodriguez. Cheers!
12/7/22, 8:57 AM
This story ticked a lot of my boxes, I really like to hear about superhero's changing and the "_stop justice, help criminals_" line was brilliant. I do agree maybe his name should have been changed to "_**Criminal Boy**_", like others have said, i would really like to see a follow up. Thanks for writing it
12/7/22, 8:30 AM
Oblivious himbo father/exploratory son incest? How could I have known I’d love this so much? And of course, I love the amount of cum, too—always my favourite kink. Looking forward to more!
12/7/22, 8:24 AM
Intriguing beginning! I love the creativity with the lovers’ chocolates, and I’m curious things will go with Dan…
12/7/22, 8:04 AM
Well, what can I say - that was just incredible! I've always loved your stories, Swizz and Edlam and this didn't disappoint, checking all of my boxes for oblivious change, hypno and sharp suits. Like Bostonhypno, I nutted at the undressing scene and had to come back for more. Superb!
12/7/22, 7:15 AM
Wow, what a roller coaster! I love how you're able to weave convincing characters into such twisted and perverted fantasies. This series just gets better and better!