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8/23/25, 7:59 AM
I just loved the story from start to finish, excellent work man.

8/23/25, 3:04 PM
@[Dreamer_Br](/user/show/10042048) Thank you!
8/23/25, 1:26 PM
This chapter was so hot. I just want more. I wonder if anything is going to happen to the football coach...
8/23/25, 12:34 PM
Very hot. Would love to get into the specifics of his training, i.e. he will need workouts to stay as fit and desirable as he is. And the psychological training, as he realizes that he has no choice, and then that he's better off this way. it sounds almost like there's some quality in the suit that will turn him into a pup. Thank you, super hot!
Anonymous
8/22/25, 5:21 PM
Utter perfection.

8/23/25, 11:18 AM
@Anonymous Thank you.
DD
8/23/25, 10:21 AM
I love this plot device, I love your characters, they really serve as an outlet for the reader to live vicariously through, and also through Devon, display what people would truly feel going through this process. I'm looking forward to seeing either more of this story, or one of the other branches of a Business Proposition.
Chris
8/23/25, 10:19 AM
Part 2 please
8/23/25, 9:30 AM
Love this !!!!!! very well constructed story from the start til this very ending !!! Of course it must be an ending that all heroes are fallen and become this perverted version of themselves !!!<33333
Tim03
8/23/25, 8:38 AM
We need the next chapter!!
8/23/25, 6:45 AM
Hola amigo... Cuando hay más de esta historia Edyrobles
Amazing
8/23/25, 5:42 AM
Love the way he is slowly becoming a soft wobbly sissy, hopefully all that cake will turn him to flab and his penis will get buried