Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/28/19, 2:15 AM
I'd probably be a Darius or the Third option. But anyway, The sudden change of focus was a bit jarring. The start was completely transitioned well but then it was lost at the time Brody became the focus. It's a minor thing. But bad writing is a turn off for me... Which thankfully isn't common in this site.

11/27/25, 7:51 AM
@Anonymous I know this story is 6 years old. but here we go anyway .... it's quite a rich irony that you think you'd be. a darius when you're literally throwing bossy bottom shade. The bad writing comment is another "bless your heart" moment... his writing is actually decent. Perhaps you don’t understand the difference between "writing" and "creativity" and it says a lot about you that you'd comment anonymously to bitch about someone selves creative choice just because it didn’t press your bitch button the right way. IF you'd ever put yourself out there like that then you wouldn't have taken the time to shit all over someone else's hard work. Hope you're not still "that guy" today
11/27/25, 7:48 AM
Well, at least Jamie's rather surprising resistance and anger from the last chapter is explained. But ...... I'll wait for the next to see.
Arachnus The Spider
3/28/19, 2:42 AM
I thought I was being pretty equitable between the two men. *shrug* I welcome the criticism, but as for bad writing, you would need to be more specific. Otherwise it's impossible to address. I did go ahead and threw the end digression out because I sensed that might have to do with it. It was self-indulgent, I know. But all of this is. Update should reflect the change soon.

11/27/25, 7:39 AM
@Arachnus The Spider "Anonymous" up there was just being pissy for no reason. Your writing is quite good. What he's calling bad writing is "bossy brat not getting exactly what he wants" ... "I know this story and comment thread is years old, but just hate when people try to tear someone else down just to make themselves feel superior
11/27/25, 6:45 AM
This is one of my most favorite stories ever. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
11/27/25, 4:08 AM
Just keeps getting better & better. The story is written at just the right pace to keep you wanting to scroll down more & more. Hopefully, further adventures with the neighbours and friends to come 😛 Thank you for sharing.
11/27/25, 12:50 AM
A good chapter, but not without its flaws. One of them is that it's very strange that Matt Taylor's neighbor doesn't notice, or barely notices, the strange things happening to his neighbor, the one they live with. He should have already guessed it all started with the game. The chapter itself is very well written, and I liked everything else, especially the ending.
11/26/25, 6:34 AM
FUUUCK!!!!! This is so fucking HOT, Stimle. I agree with Jack. This never fails to get me off, no matter how many times I re-read it.

11/26/25, 11:04 PM
@[fegatan13](/user/show/10061933) Oh!! Thanks so much! It was a lot of fun to write.
11/26/25, 10:26 PM
Looking forward to more.
Retro
11/26/25, 7:26 PM
I liked this story. IMO It's a bit boring when everyone gets what they want, a 'Bad End' can be hot, and there's something hot about a bit of humiliation and dark erotica. Keep it up!

11/26/25, 8:49 PM
@Retro Thank you. I’m a bit surprised at the reaction to a Bad End when I’ve read so so many other stories on here with them.

11/26/25, 9:37 PM
@[Gilbert Milton Snodgrass](/user/show/10003195) It's praise that so many people have read it and you evoked emotions and a response so to me, thats a win! Specifically disregard hate or critical texts that don't offer value. ESPECIALLY from anonymous users!
11/26/25, 9:00 PM
this is so hot lol