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5/21/22, 10:02 PM
Just submitted to release the next part a bit early. I shouldn't have left you all hanging with out some real fucked up shit going on first!! Hopefully that'll post by the end of the day today, but will release the sister part to that (from the perspective of one of the twins while they're being mind-fucked) next Friday. After that, I'll release the next chapter from Johannes' perspective and the sister chapter of the person he's taking control of every Friday after that :) So excited to have a fully realized story finally all done before submitting, making sure I don't leave you all completely hanging!

5/22/22, 1:39 PM
@EdIam well that's my jerking off for the next few weeks
5/22/22, 1:38 PM
Loved your story as usual
5/22/22, 1:25 PM
Just let it happen
5/22/22, 1:08 PM
Loved it! I think variety and diversity keeps martial fresh. I was really into this ☺️
5/22/22, 12:43 PM
I’m excited to see Carter become one of the physically customized insatiable self-lubing fucksluts you write so well, I think what many other people are picking up on is that the story needs unresolved tension as the changes get wild and sexy. I like the idea of Carter and Rusty having power over changing each other with a level of not having proper control over their power to change. Make Carter into a dumb and ultra fuckable fat assed sex toy, but he’s desire to be a caster gives him some STRONG charm spells and power he can realy only even conceive of using to get plowed hard and treated like a slut. Give Rusty the experience he wants topping Carter but make it twisted in a way he finds he doesn’t enjoy being so much at someone else’s mercy in the kind of way he was happy to use Carter. Or reveal that Rusty’s weirder personality elements like an insistence on treating Carter like a dummy and an object are a result of someone ELSE already having edited Rusty with a sheet. As always love your writing!
5/22/22, 12:16 PM
Damn good story
5/22/22, 11:55 AM
too good
5/22/22, 11:51 AM
love this
5/22/22, 9:53 AM
So glad you're back EdIam :) Can't wait to find out how Steven gets mind fucked
5/22/22, 7:49 AM
I am so filled with sadness for the loneliness of Stu and the betrayal of David that it's painful to read thestory. Excellent job in manoepulating the characters and reader and please make this right!

5/22/22, 9:38 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you, that is so kind! My aim here is to try to write something that feels relatively true to life - what I imagine would come up were it to happen to any one of us. David, Stuart, even Patrick are all flawed in some way and each have their own weaknesses, goals and motivations. I think if any one of us were to be Stuart; knowing you are, in almost every way, superior to everyone around you would make you feel incredibly isolated, not to mention the survivor's guilt you'd carry because of how you'd got your powers. I think it'd be hard to live with that when most people you meet would be too bamboozled into lust or jealousy with your physique or incredible powers to even consider that you might not want them, or that underneath the orange spandex, you're a person.