Recent Comments

10/3/25, 2:04 PM
Really cute! If I may give you a tip: Spread out the chapters a bit. Like, keep at least two or three days between each chapter. Each new chapter published will bring the series back to the top of the list. You can also use the "Do not publish before" field to set a publish date. Then the chapters can get approved and published at the exact rhythm you prefer.
9/30/25, 3:00 AM
You have Chapter 4 listed twice. I think the chapters made it feel a bit disjointed so maybe just remove them?

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Good call! Love your work, thanks for the tip!

10/3/25, 12:22 PM
@[Jai](/user/show/692615) Thank you. I try to be supportive of others best I can.
10/3/25, 7:10 AM
Great work, want more of this! lots of exciting possibilities
9/28/25, 11:35 PM
Das ist eine spannende Geschichte, die sich schön zu einem Cliffhanger aufbaut. Jetzt will ich auch die Fortsetzung lesen ...

10/3/25, 6:10 AM
@[Portuguese Lion](/user/show/572598) @[Corin](/user/show/125990) Danke für die wohlwollenden Kommentare. Das motiviert mich gerade sehr, das nächste Kapitel fertigzustellen.
Oct 1, 2025
10/3/25, 5:28 AM
Really great story! Who doesn't love a townful of goons?!
10/3/25, 4:55 AM
I agree I am enjoying this story
10/3/25, 3:24 AM
Is there going to be more?
10/3/25, 2:45 AM
Is there going to be a continuation or is this the final chapter?
9/22/25, 1:20 PM
Interest? Yes! Please continue.

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) On it! :)
10/2/25, 3:20 PM
Great to have you writing. Love this. Does Jay even remember his own name? Would love to read more from this universe.

10/2/25, 11:25 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! We might see more from this universe, we'll see... Well, we'll see if we see more, by definition I s'pose.