Recent Comments

11/26/25, 5:46 PM
Oh man this was awesome! Jamie needs to wake up and save Archie/Dusk from the person he hates most, the person responsible for the league, the head of the tribunal, the author of all of his misery and suffering, an apathetic uncaring monster who built his throne on power intimidation and indifference to suffering

11/26/25, 7:42 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) That's my best guess at what happens next, too. Of course, @NeonDemon has a way of confounding all our best guesses. Who knows what will come out of that imagination next?
Anonymous
11/26/25, 7:00 PM
I think I read this story on tumblr, really liked this one. I hope more like this will come, I love boyfriend theme :D
11/26/25, 6:53 PM
This has to be one of my favorite stories in this site. The set up is so hot and I feel like we’re so close to a pay off here! I hope you continue this series!
Anonymous
11/26/25, 5:39 PM
Not gonna lie, I couldn't take Tyler as an adult. Dude was childish the entire story and went behind his father's back when he could've just been honest.
11/26/25, 5:17 PM
Strangely I had just brought this topic up in the Forum. Is there an increase in mean spirited endings and a very valid point was brought up: Some people like this. If a story doesn't agree with me I'll move on and not comment because the author "Put himself out there" and took a chance. Its well written and will appeal to someone and how else will an author learn who their audience is and what they like if they don't take risks. Here's a wild thought... looking at the avatar and his name, what if the author is (in real life) the newly nerded kid in this story and this is how he feels. Had this a happier ending I would have given him 4 and 5 star ratings. Keep writing and keep putting yourself out there, Gilbert!
dickshit
11/26/25, 3:28 PM
dickshit need be total faggot for ANY Master and broken into utter submission as here
11/26/25, 3:12 PM
I love what you did with this story! Thank you for sharing it with us here!
11/26/25, 1:27 PM
I'm BEGGING you to continue this story!!! It's absolutely incredible!!!
dickshit
11/26/25, 1:19 PM
dickshit need be owned by Black master it need fucking senseless by Black master it has no choice but to serve and obey
dickshit
11/26/25, 12:17 PM
dickshit needs to become such a faggot it must serve superiors cocks