Recent Comments

Retro
11/26/25, 7:26 PM
I liked this story. IMO It's a bit boring when everyone gets what they want, a 'Bad End' can be hot, and there's something hot about a bit of humiliation and dark erotica. Keep it up!

11/26/25, 8:49 PM
@Retro Thank you. I’m a bit surprised at the reaction to a Bad End when I’ve read so so many other stories on here with them.

11/26/25, 9:37 PM
@[Gilbert Milton Snodgrass](/user/show/10003195) It's praise that so many people have read it and you evoked emotions and a response so to me, thats a win! Specifically disregard hate or critical texts that don't offer value. ESPECIALLY from anonymous users!
11/26/25, 9:00 PM
this is so hot lol
11/26/25, 8:48 PM
I hope you're planning to add more to this hot story in the future.
11/26/25, 5:46 PM
Oh man this was awesome! Jamie needs to wake up and save Archie/Dusk from the person he hates most, the person responsible for the league, the head of the tribunal, the author of all of his misery and suffering, an apathetic uncaring monster who built his throne on power intimidation and indifference to suffering

11/26/25, 7:42 PM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) That's my best guess at what happens next, too. Of course, @NeonDemon has a way of confounding all our best guesses. Who knows what will come out of that imagination next?
Anonymous
11/26/25, 7:00 PM
I think I read this story on tumblr, really liked this one. I hope more like this will come, I love boyfriend theme :D
11/26/25, 6:53 PM
This has to be one of my favorite stories in this site. The set up is so hot and I feel like we’re so close to a pay off here! I hope you continue this series!
Anonymous
11/26/25, 5:39 PM
Not gonna lie, I couldn't take Tyler as an adult. Dude was childish the entire story and went behind his father's back when he could've just been honest.
11/26/25, 5:17 PM
Strangely I had just brought this topic up in the Forum. Is there an increase in mean spirited endings and a very valid point was brought up: Some people like this. If a story doesn't agree with me I'll move on and not comment because the author "Put himself out there" and took a chance. Its well written and will appeal to someone and how else will an author learn who their audience is and what they like if they don't take risks. Here's a wild thought... looking at the avatar and his name, what if the author is (in real life) the newly nerded kid in this story and this is how he feels. Had this a happier ending I would have given him 4 and 5 star ratings. Keep writing and keep putting yourself out there, Gilbert!
dickshit
11/26/25, 3:28 PM
dickshit need be total faggot for ANY Master and broken into utter submission as here
11/26/25, 3:12 PM
I love what you did with this story! Thank you for sharing it with us here!