Recent Comments

10/4/25, 3:09 AM
Awesome story! Already jerked off to it three times and it is just getting started. Thanks man, seriously sexy.

10/5/25, 3:33 AM
@[JohnnyBravo](/user/show/1359353) Glad you're enjoying it some much! There's loads more to come, don't you worry. 😁
10/4/25, 3:18 AM
Such a flamin great story - Love the concept and the way you described the transformative process.

10/5/25, 2:52 AM
@[MuscleMir](/user/show/10066979) Thanks I'm really glad you liked it. I've enjoyed getting to know you.
10/2/25, 11:23 PM
Well at least he seems happy. If it were me, I would've been petty and voiced my desire to get some payback from Kent, maybe the guy agrees and does something about it. 😆

10/2/25, 11:25 PM
@[Aether](/user/show/1508576) Fair enough, but I tried to wrap that up by noting that Jay doesn't really remember anything about his previous life. That doesn't mean Kent doesn't remember ... or that "the man" (purposely nameless) doesn't remember that Kent sold out his best friend.

10/4/25, 11:14 PM
@[astrolub](/user/show/471552) Oh, I meant like as a last act of anger before the cum erased his memories. I definitely would've tried to plant the idea to the guy if I was the one that got "screwed over." Anyway, great work! Realized I forgot to mention that before. 😅

10/5/25, 12:30 AM
@[Aether](/user/show/1508576) Ah! As in, happening between chapter 2 and the epilogue here. Got it. It might not be satisfying, but I'll explain why I didn't do that: Sometimes, the bad guys get away with things. We often like to see them get their comeuppance – and we might ;) – but that doesn't mean people aren't hurt first.
10/4/25, 11:56 PM
I know you've written a lot of great stuff since moving on from this story, but any chance you might come back to it at some point to finish out the tale?
10/4/25, 10:44 PM
so. this hit a number of my buttons very hard. _slammed_ them, really. like. **wow**. There's not much better than seeing a bunch of your kinks demonstrated well, and this was far beyond 'well'. --- For a a personal taste point of view (though, 'leaving it to the reader's imagination' might well have been the best choice), I would have like to have seen a few snapshots of the first few weeks at the gym.
10/4/25, 8:43 PM
OMG! I love Parker. I hope we get another Pack Chapter, but also cannot wait for Zeke and Daddy. Keep it cummin bro.
10/4/25, 8:34 PM
A new reveal! Nate was right, his dad _wasn't_ dirty. The sex here was hot of course but the lore drops hit me even more excited lol. Can't wait for next week!
Apr 28, 2021
Balled One
10/4/25, 8:14 PM
Good story, but it needed a bit more of a climax at, or before, the end.
10/4/25, 8:06 PM
Danke für diese Erweiterung und einen weiteren Protagonisten.
Nov 26, 2019
10/4/25, 3:45 PM
I very much like the idea of swapping: boots, uniforms, roles - and bodies. As I see I am not the only one. GREAT!!!